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Catching Willow
Summary: Christian has been searching for Willow for a hundred years, and he's still sixteen.
Will he ever find Willow?
Christian begins to doubt himself, and doubt if she is even real at all.
Will he ever find Willow?
Christian begins to doubt himself, and doubt if she is even real at all.
it was really good....don't second guess yourself....just improve on what you have....i really liked the description...and how well u integreated it into the story....the charachters were alive...so that's good lol...but the wolf..or whatever he is...needs a bit more clarification...lol...and it's sightly typical but that's fine....all in all it was good lol....idk if u like poetry but u can check out my work if u like...
Thanks for the feedback! Lol, and the wolf thing is supposed to be a shadow soul, I wanted it to be unclear at the beginning until he finds Willow. However, I'm not wandering wether or not that really works. I've let friends and teachers read other things I've written and they've said I need more clarification on other things I write too. So I guess that's my week spot, lol. And I'd love to check out your stuff!
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