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Unorthodox Angel

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Sidney S.
Unorthodox Angel
Summary: When Phoenix gets shot by her drug-addicted mother, she finds herself in a hospital. She meets a bad boy named Jakobie. He's covered in tattoos, has black hair, and has a distinct air about him. After he saves her life twice, she finds that she can't live without him, and finds the reason he saved her might have to do with angels.





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ZoePaliski said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 8:14 pm:
I lost my dad so I understand how you feel about your grandpa. I loved the story, and the last part about your grandpa was so sweet. Keep writing!
 
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RoseLuvsTulips said...
Apr. 10, 2013 at 2:10 pm:
I read the end of the chapter and I was AWW! Then I read the part to your grandpa and I almost cried. Great story though!
 
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Love_Jesus18 said...
Jan. 30, 2013 at 11:05 am:
love the story i am glad that it was like twilight and it was very beautiful but i am so sorry about your grandpa....
 
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poemluv said...
Sept. 17, 2012 at 11:49 am:
I love it! It's amazing and touching(:
 
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nemish23 said...
Mar. 23, 2012 at 5:10 pm:

It's a little bit like twilight but apart from that it's a great story! I love the characters, especially their names, they are beautiful.

I'm sorry about your grandfather. I lost a relative too and then wrote a story based on it too. 'From My Heart' if you wanna check it out.

It's funny how writing sometimes helps us grieve right?

But keep writing, you have an awesome talent :)

 
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Winged.Living.Free.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3, 2012 at 6:49 pm:
Beautiful! And I'm happy for your Grandpa. :)(:
 
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Roselove445This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 5:54 pm:
That was so good please keep writing i would love to read more!!! :)
 
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BluBirdWriter13 said...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 7:35 pm:
i cried during half of it its so beautifuel
 
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BelleRoy said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 5:39 am:
This is amazing. You are a terrific writer, and I bet your grandpa is so proud of you and is looking out for you everyday. Thank you for writing this.
 
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Jeera said...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 4:15 pm:
This story is really good and it's pure. :) I like it a lot and your comment at the end is really sweet. I'm sure your grandpa loves it :)
 
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JustCallMeSarah said...
Oct. 16, 2011 at 10:54 am:
It wont let me add this as a favorite! DX Beautifuly written, loved it =)
 
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no1texastiger said...
Sept. 23, 2011 at 12:23 pm:
Aww! I loved this story! Fantastic job!
 
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SilverLuna said...
Sept. 19, 2011 at 7:37 pm:
Pretty dang good!(:
 
laurenangela replied...
Sept. 21, 2011 at 4:15 pm :
thank you!
 
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LilLover5-15 said...
Aug. 11, 2011 at 10:41 am:
LOVE IT!Absolutley love it
 
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Aug. 11, 2011 at 12:58 pm :
thank you!
 
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Aug. 11, 2011 at 12:58 pm :
Thank you!
 
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AnyaLafayaa said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 6:19 pm:
This story is so amazing! There's not one spelling error, it's sweet, and has a spectacular plot. I'm completely impressed. Honestly, this story deserves to be number one, it's so heart warming and written well. I'm positive your grandfather is proud of you. Nice work!
 
laurenangela replied...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 7:54 pm :
thank you so much!
 
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Bookworm1998 said...
Jul. 3, 2011 at 10:41 pm:
beautiful story! i love both of your main characters and i love how cautious and well-minded Phoenix is. i just wish that the story could last longer :)
 
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