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Farther Away

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Molly B.
Farther Away
Summary: For years, Ivy has lived with the knowledge of a secret world known as Mephoras, with only her best friend Cliff to guide her through life on Earth. When things break down suddenly, she must make a choice: Will she resist this evil, die at the hand of it, maybe? Or maybe will she fall in love with this evil, a 14 year old king with mysterious charm?





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Aishiah said...
Nov. 16, 2012 at 3:04 pm:
I really enjoyed the image that I got while reading this. The only thing that I see is, Your using past tense verbs while using present tense verbs. Try to use either one or the other, it'll make your writing less confusing and easier to follw.
 
Mollyimmortal83 replied...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 11:30 pm :
Thank you so much for the advice, but while copying the chapter from word onto this website, the flashback (all past tense) in the chapter became no longer italicized.
 
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