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Dudet95
I Will Not Break
Summary: My breathing sped up, and my heart rate excelled as he turned the corner.
I stood cautiously with my back up against the wall as He edged toward me.
I kept all emotion from my face so he wouldn't know I was freaking out, as my hand hovered over the doorknob.
His Blood red Gaze followed my movement, and He grinned at me, and I gasped.
His teeth were sparkling white, with sharp long fangs.
I yanked the door open, and ran as fast I could, but that didn't stop him.
He grabbed hold of my wrist, and pulled me back to him.

The rain poured down our faces, and dripped down his wavy ear length Black hair.
I tried to tear my gaze from his eyes, but it was no use. They were mesmerizing, and not in the good way.
He brought his hand up, and stroked my cheek.
I tried to pull away but an inhuman growl escaped his cold dead lips.
He leaned down to where his face was inched from mine, and softly whispered in my ear.
" Welcome to the slave trade sweet heart. We will break you. ”





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HarryPotterLover30 said...
Oct. 7, 2012 at 1:37 pm:
Ohmydearsweetlord. Holy guacomole............... I"m about to die. This....... by FAR, is one of the best books I have EVER read, on TeenInk , or published in real life. I applade you. This is........ amazing. I am DEFINETLY going to look for the second one. and HELLS YEAH i'm going to spread the word of this story; because thsi story deserves some SERIOUS recognition. Amazing. I have NO crittisism.... well, maybe with a little editing on the spelling and  grammar errors, but those... (more »)
 
Dudet95 replied...
Oct. 8, 2012 at 11:18 am :
Thank you so much:) I am in the process of editing all the errors now and that is why I have been taking so long to update the second. lol sorryXD
 
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BlackRaven said...
Mar. 7, 2012 at 1:07 pm:

Ru going to finish

 

 
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BlackRaven said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 8:13 am:

Please tell me your gonna finish it!!!Pleasssssssssseeee finish it!

 

 
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BlackRaven said...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 8:06 am:
I AM READING THIS EVRY DAY DAY SOO GOOD
 
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ShayleeMarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 4:44 pm:
OMGosh! So amazing!!!!!! I love it!!!!!!!! You have to finish it!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!! Oh, watch out for misspellings and word mixups. You would often say "to" when you meant "two". and you would put "strait" (which means narrow) when it should have been "straight". You also many times put "through" when it should have been "threw". I find that it helps to read through what I have written before posting.
 
BlackRaven replied...
Mar. 5, 2012 at 7:57 am :
Most awesomest book ever!Danggirl YOU can write
 
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livethelifeyouwanttolive said...
Oct. 21, 2011 at 11:10 am:

I AM OFFICIALLY OBSESSED WITH THIS BOOK!!!

It's AHMAZING!!! Please keep writing. You're very talented. <33

 
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LazyBlueKitten said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 7:50 pm:
My gosh this is good. You're really talented! :)
 
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