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THE PEASANT GIRL

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THE PEASANT GIRL
Summary: Prince Caerus of Cariden is forced into an engagement with the Princess of a new world-power threatening to conquer his country. He has almost resigned himself to his fate when he stumbles across a strange peasant girl, who changes his perception of everything from life and death, beauty and ugliness, right and wrong, and love and hate.





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TanazMasabaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 16, 2013 at 10:24 am:
I love this story! when will you post more???
 
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Christine K. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 14, 2013 at 3:37 pm:
LOVE your characterization!! So good. :)
 
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SilentWordsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 27, 2011 at 9:03 pm:
Please write more!
 
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I_Love_Books said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:18 pm:

I'm stalkinq your book too much :(

-IT'S SO GOOD (((:

 
Vanendra replied...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 8:50 am :

YOU BOOK STALKER!!!! >.>

 

you stole my job D;

 
I_Love_Books replied...
Jun. 10, 2011 at 6:54 pm :
Lol :O i DID xDD
 
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I_Love_Books said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 1:03 pm:

Please hurry and write more becuase I'm about to die (not litterally xD)

-It's so good ! (:

 
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I_Love_Books said...
Apr. 29, 2011 at 12:56 pm:
Your book rules ;d
 
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dreamer759 said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 10:19 pm:
This is really good. The world you've created is so real. I love Caerus. He's a flawed person that I can't help but root for
 
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MasterZone said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 7:40 pm:

  I think that one part of the story can be improved (Chapter 4):

  “Well,” Onaje’ said after Caerus didn’t speak for several moments. “She’s in perfect health, except for being malnourished, of course. If you don’t mind, I have other patients to attend to.”

 

  For that paragraph in the story, it said how a person is in perfect health when she was malnourished. That is just medically incorrect. You c... (more »)

 
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Some O said...
Apr. 27, 2011 at 6:00 pm:
PLEASE FINISH THIS BOOK, ITS ROCKS ;D
 
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Magyk32 said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 12:07 pm:
when are you going to finish this? I really really liked it.
 
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Magyk32 said...
Apr. 3, 2011 at 12:05 pm:
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE!!! DON'T QUIT NOW!
 
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Lilybird said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 5:13 pm:
This is an amazing start! Please write more! I am very curious about what will happen next!!! :)
 
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Vanendra said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 3:07 pm:
Why did you have to make your story soooooo good?     >:(     I hope you post more chapters soon!
 
everything_shane replied...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 1:52 am :
I agree :) cool story.. i love to read it :)
 
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DinoNugget said...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 8:45 pm:
It's really good!  I'm guessing the little girl is the Pesant Girl...?  I thought she would turn into a love interest.  Darn.  Maybe there's still hope in an older sister.  The mysterious Keona, perhaps?  I don't know--you're the author!  ;)  Write on!
 
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stellabella21 said...
Jan. 29, 2011 at 2:17 pm:
is is really good!
 
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Keilah This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 11:18 am:
 Why aren't there any paragraphs in the second chapter?
 
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CrazyWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 26, 2010 at 10:50 am:
Proving me worng.......keep it going... 5 stars
 
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