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Pirate's Kiss

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Author's note: This piece was inspired really weirdly. I was drinking red bull then watching the duchess and...  Show full author's note »
Author's note: This piece was inspired really weirdly. I was drinking red bull then watching the duchess and then Pirates of The Caribbean. Then I fell asleep.
That has to be the freakiest dream in the world. God that was odd.  « Hide author's note
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Another Persons Shoulder

Chapter Three
I don’t know how long I sat there, crying into Nathaniel’s shoulder. I daren’t tell father or my stepmother. It would cause far too much commotion and unwanted attention. I felt Nathaniel’s hand floating across my hair.
“He kissed me,” I sniffled, stuttering the words out. “W-w-why did he do that?”
Nathaniel stopped and tensed.
“Naddy,” I said teasingly, prodding him in the side.
“It’s just sealing the deal, something pirates
I dedicate this to my mom. Because well. she's my mom. Which fits in well with the 'Another Person's Shoulder' chapter. Love you mom, Don't get big headed, It's not fun.
do.” He muttered into my ear.
As soon as his voice reached my mind. I shuddered and jerked upwards. “There are pirates here?” My voice was croaky and my eyes blotchy from crying. “That’s what he is?”
“Yes,”
Pirates. I just made a deal with a pirate. To allow him to take me on my twenty first birthday. Wow.
“They won’t come after you, you know.” He assured me.
I stayed silent.
“And if they do? I’m coming with you.”
I uttered a small thank you. I didn’t hear it and I don’t think he did.
“I should report to your father.” He made a move to stand up.
“NO!” I screamed, clinging on to his shirt, the disparity ringing out in my voice.
He sighed and sat down beside me. “Of course, I should stay here with you. I doubt your father knowing will be much use to us at all.” He took my hand in his. “Does he know who you are?”
“I don’t know. He didn’t call me by my name. But why else would he come after me. It has to be a power play with my father.” My voice was still shaky.
“Then why wait four years?”
“I don’t know.” I broke down in tears again, just when I was starting to feel better. I should not cry. But I did.
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Gr8manThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 14 at 6:47 am:
Personally, I like the unsigned letter footnotes. They make a great little suspense piece. Don't stop writing! :)
 
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Candice J. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21, 2013 at 2:17 pm:
I just started reading, but I love this so far! You're a great writer :)
 
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MadMinionThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 16, 2012 at 3:06 pm:
You're both very important people! (according to this site) How fancy!
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Apr. 17, 2012 at 3:56 am :
we just chatted to each other with comments. it works, try it!
 
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Renegade9891 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:47 am:
Dude, all of a sudden it's gone up to 725 ratings. OMG!!!!!!!!!
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 4:32 am :
I'VE GOT THE ANSWER!!! OKAY, WHEN ANYONE RATES IT, IT LIKE ADDS TEN VOTES OR SOMETHING INSTEAD OF JUST ONE!!!!
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:42 am :
Oy, I'm sure I'm just doing really well!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Mwahahahahhahah. *cough* *cough* *sniffle* *burst into uncontrollable tears*
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:44 am :
mwahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:47 am :
930 ratings... Yay, that means I've recieved 60 five star ratings in two minutes. Yeah!!!!!!!!!! get in. I love you voters. No really, cheers people. Very happy writer here. 
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:51 am :
990 ratings!!!!!!!!!!! All five stars...
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 8:30 am :
GLIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIITCH
 
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FULLSTOP said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:40 am:
doo doo da doo doo (manamana)
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:42 am :
Not this again Charlotte!! :)
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:43 am :
Wearing thin on tunes Charlotte. Hmmm?
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:58 am :
nope i'm just annoying you
 
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Renegade9891 said...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:39 am:
Heya Charlotte. It's a little over a day and I've recieved over 500 votes!!!!!!!!! Thank you all so much!!!!
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:41 am :
lou lou, it might just be a glitch.......
 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:44 am :

Oyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!

Meany!!!!
I was happy, you are sending me spiralling into the depth of deppression.

 
Renegade9891 replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 2:46 am :
I have six hundred five star ratings!!!!  And it is not a glitch Charlotte Lancaster. So Humph. :p
 
FULLSTOP replied...
Mar. 30, 2012 at 6:39 am :

and hardly any wiews........

G.L.I.T.C.H

 
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