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Vampirial

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Raphael K.
Vampirial
Summary: It is a brutal competition to achieve Vampirial. Lives are at stake. Danger arises...and most of a all, an evil being that will change everything.



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WOWritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23 at 12:34 pm:
I quite like the idea of this book. I've read the first few chapters and I like the way you start it off, but I think the continuous reference to the fact the carpet is 'polymer' is a bit pointless. I think the speech is stunted and odd. Nadiya doesn't seem at all fazed that she's a vampire, as if this happens every day. She just asks Victor why he did that and then lets it drop and starts running to him as if he didn't just start eating her. Also, both Lena and Amos... (more »)
 
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