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I wonder if God can hear me when I complain. Does it annoy him that I'm too human to ever be anything better? I want to make him proud but how can I when I fall short of my own expectations. I can feel him sometimes and it brings peace to my chaotic heart. I search for a way out of this realm of who I should be and who I'm expected to be. God must hear my lame get rich quick schemes so I won't have to depend on anyone. Does he hear my struggle of me being my only true need. Am I a fool for trying so hard to escape my parents cage? Should I feel angry and sick for still having to depend on them after sixteen years?
Should God pay any attention to me at all? Am I worth his precious moments or precious thoughts? I need to be free. I need to be wreckless. I need to taste life and be able to savor it. I'm not going to stay in one place. I shall be like the wind, blowing from one place to the next. Letting everything I love be swept away. So help me God I can't and won't be bound by anything.



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Dreamboat said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 2:43 pm:
Blow on a camel log
 
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freedom said...
Jan. 30, 2011 at 6:54 pm:

There's absolutely no evidence for the existence of any god.  Religion is man-made nonsense.  You can live a perfectly healthy, moral, and rewarding life without it. 

Enjoy life while you can...it's pretty amazing =]

 
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Feb. 11, 2013 at 8:19 pm :
i challenge you to read the Bible form front to back then come back and try to prove me wrong and in return ill read whatever textbook of evolution or whatever you believe in and try to prove you wrong. life has blessings when you follow the God of the Bible. Challenge?
 
Rainbow replied...
Jun. 22 at 12:53 am :
... great great. and I challegne you to read the Quran from front to back... and let me know what you think, and I'll answer any doubts you got.  I've read the bible previously, now you gotta check the Quran. :) tc.
 
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Sylvia said...
Nov. 11, 2010 at 4:01 pm:
If you're talking about breaking away from faith in God, calm down and rethink. Of course you're worth God's time. He's omnipresent, omniscient and immutable: how could He not have any time to listen to one of His creations? This desire to live wrecklessly is a test to see how level-headed you can stay, to see which path you will take in this spiritual crisis. Take the one that will bring you true salvation, not an experience that may feel energising now, but you might regret later. :^)
 
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