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to fall in love with someone you dont love, can either be an admiration or an addiction

to love someone who doesn't love you back , can either be martyrdom or foolishness

to love someone because that someone loves you back, can either be true love or blindness

to be loved by someone and not love that someone back, can either be cruelty or its just not meant to be

to be loved for who you are and love that someone because of that, can either be infatuation or the real thing



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yentr0k96 said...
Sept. 30, 2013 at 2:42 pm:
this is absolutley brilliant. i love it. i wish i wouldve thought this up. 
 
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SuperSami97 said...
May 25, 2011 at 2:23 pm:
This is a really good piece!  Consider your parallelism as you start each line.  Also, maybe try to think of a better ending that really sums up the whole thing.
 
maartee replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:20 pm :
thanks for the tips! i will consider it and see what i can do.. :)
 
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LolaFinley96 said...
Jul. 21, 2010 at 1:31 am:
so true.. only if others could read this.. everyone wouldnt be in a such a haze about love
 
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maartee said...
Aug. 20, 2009 at 6:11 am:
wow! thanks for the comments! i really appreciate it.. weee.. im so happy you guys like it!!!! ^____________^
 
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unearthlyhaphazard said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 5:15 pm:
True, very true. Nice work!
 
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Jennax3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 19, 2009 at 3:43 pm:
this is truly a masterpiece! very insightful.
amazing job :)
 
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