Why Should you Care?

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You come walking back
Acting like you want to attack,
Asking questions
Of my personal life.
But hun,
We are three months done.
I can walk with who I want
And why should you care?
Because you the one that wasn’t fair,
Calling us an end
Before we could begin.
So don’t act cool now.
Just walk away
And don’t come another day?





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Clairepoetry said...
May 13, 2010 at 10:11 am
babiger1194 is right this is very well worded and its very sophsicated i like it alot keep writing :)
 
Honeybunn replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 4:35 pm
Thank you for your comment and motivation! you have no idea how much it means to me :)
 
babigerl1194 said...
May 13, 2010 at 8:43 am
i really loved the the choice of words and the rhyming was more sophisticated, nice job. ps plz check my work too. :D
 
Honeybunn replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 4:33 pm

thank you so much!

and i will deff check into your work too :)

 
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