Why Should you Care?

May 1, 2010
By Honeybunn GOLD, Chesterfield, South Carolina
Honeybunn GOLD, Chesterfield, South Carolina
11 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
*look inside my quote book*


You come walking back
Acting like you want to attack,
Asking questions
Of my personal life.
But hun,
We are three months done.
I can walk with who I want
And why should you care?
Because you the one that wasn’t fair,
Calling us an end
Before we could begin.
So don’t act cool now.
Just walk away
And don’t come another day?



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Honeybunn GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 4:35 pm
Honeybunn GOLD, Chesterfield, South Carolina
11 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
*look inside my quote book*

Thank you for your comment and motivation! you have no idea how much it means to me :)

Honeybunn GOLD said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 4:33 pm
Honeybunn GOLD, Chesterfield, South Carolina
11 articles 1 photo 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
*look inside my quote book*

thank you so much!

and i will deff check into your work too :)


on May. 13 2010 at 10:11 am
effortlesslove BRONZE, Westminster, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"A friend is someone who can sing the song in your heart when you have forgotten the words"i

babiger1194 is right this is very well worded and its very sophsicated i like it alot keep writing :)

on May. 13 2010 at 8:43 am
babigerl1194 PLATINUM, Margaretville, New York
23 articles 10 photos 155 comments

Favorite Quote:
wat doesnt kill you only makes you stronger

i really loved the the choice of words and the rhyming was more sophisticated, nice job. ps plz check my work too. :D


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