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Patriarchy,
Monarchy,
Matriarchy,
Oligarchy …
So many arches
yet not one
can uphold
its burdens.

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beautifulspiritThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 4:46 pm
So true~ what a way to put it!
 
Brooke B. said...
Aug. 10, 2009 at 1:21 am
I like it.
 
Alex C. said...
Jul. 11, 2009 at 12:16 am
Regicide,
Patricide,
Homicide,
Suicide,
So many cides
yet not one
can uphold
the required body of evidence for a court case.

I fail to see whether this is a comment about the state of government, or just some fun with suffixes.
 
fisherj This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 2, 2009 at 11:29 pm
I apologize for the negativity, but I'm not sure 'uphold' is the best word for the meaning it seems like you're building. There are a large number of alternatives that I think would improve this, otherwise good, work.
 
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