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Every time an election rolls around, people want to know what each candidate’s stance is on the issues that are important to them. Now that I can vote, I am much more interested in the ­political race. In deciding which candidate I want to vote for, there are two main issues for me: the econ­omy and education.

These issues are important to me because they ­affect me the most right now. The economy affects everyone, and education is important because I am about to enter college. When I looked at how each candidate views these issues, one man stood out to me, and that is Democratic candidate Barack Obama.

I like all of Senator Obama’s ideas for improving the economy. He wants to bring the troops home from Iraq, thereby saving the $12 billon we spend there each and every month. Another point that ­Obama makes is that the United States’ current ene­rgy policy is hurting the economy. He ­believes that if new energy bills are passed, it will help the U.S. get out of its current economic slump, and I agree. Finally, Obama plans to eliminate millions worth of tax cuts for those who do not need them. With these ideas and strategies, I strongly ­believe that Obama can improve the current state of the economy.

Obama also has a plan to improve education. He believes that we need to start educating children at a young age. His plan, Children’s First Agenda, addresses early education. He also hopes to close the gap of achievement between students, which means improving schools that need help. He wants to pay teachers more and treat them like professionals, but in exchange he calls for higher accountability.

Obama also has a plan to make ­college more ­affordable. He wants public colleges to be free for students who maintain a “B” average during high school. And he plans to give a $4,000 tax credit for college and university students who complete 100 hours of community service each year. I believe these ideas to improve education are top-notch and will help many students in the United States.

Obama has many good ideas relating to the issues I care about, and I like what he has to say. Therefore, there is no longer any doubt in my mind who will be receiving my vote: Barack Obama.

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Mossberg702This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 15 at 6:28 pm:
someone tell me if they still agree with him EVEN THOUGH he doubled our accumulated debt IN ONE TERM!!! 
 
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Pink said...
Mar. 6 at 2:59 pm:
what has it meant to you to have President Obama as the First African American President
 
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devonchick said...
Feb. 24 at 9:42 pm:
i totally agree with you! very well writen! great piece!
 
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firelily123 said...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 2:39 pm:
Obama is pro choice which is horrible! He spends so much of goverment money on Obama Care and that is NOT helping the TRILLIONS of dollars in the debt the US is in!!!!!!!!!!!
 
FroBroThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 1:48 am :

Do you know anything about obama care? It is extremely underfunded. How is an underfunded program racking up huge amounts of debt? 

And really, choosing a side based on pro life or pro choice is pathetic. There are so many more important issues right now.

 
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_truth said...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 10:07 pm:
You might think we will be saving $12 billion but Obama has propsed more spending in 20 months than all the presidents combined. When you say "eliminate millions worth of tax cuts for those who do not need them", I wonder if you realized that its for people who make over $200,000 a year and that is 50% of the small business owners. Small businesses supply over 75% of job growth in the US. When the tax cuts expire in January it will not stimulate the economy, it will... (more »)
 
Archangel1410This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 7, 2011 at 7:10 pm :
honestly hed do better than Sarah Palin. As long as she doesnt become President, which she will have a hard time doing, we are fine.
 
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LittleBit said...
Jul. 3, 2010 at 3:13 pm:
YOu talked about how Obama wanted to educate children at a younger age. Pretty soon there's probably going to be night care. The gov. simply wants to raise this country's children
 
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Kari8 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 1:13 pm:
I really like the way you stated your views. I personally am a supporter of McCain, even now after the election. But I think that you did a great job showing McCain supporters like me, a bit of the other side of the story.
 
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BlackMoonWhiteSkyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 8, 2010 at 10:06 am:
Word are just words, good ideals are nice but they don't mean squat if someone doesn't do anything about them.
By the way, your paper is very well written and organized.
 
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WriterFanatic This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 2, 2010 at 3:46 pm:
Exactly, you are correct and I agree with you. Good Job
 
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Persona said...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 3:47 pm:
Good work. You present yourself very well and I agree entirely.
 
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Sunshineyday said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:27 pm:
As a student I like Obama's attention to education reform. The incentives offered to students and teachers for performing well should be very motivating. However, I do not think things such as 'longer school years and school days' are a good idea.
 
xxxrEnxxxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 6:34 pm :
i would cry if that happened..within the next 3 years lmao
 
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JoCoGirl said...
Oct. 11, 2009 at 1:58 pm:
I totally DISAGREE! Obama's "change" is not for the betterment of America. He has not helped us at all. He is ruining the economy by ending car distributers and taking over the banks. Everything he touches seems to be dying. I did not personally like McCain, but I did back him because it was either somewhat ok or worse. And McCain had Palin, which made him a better candidate. I also do not like Obama because I do not think if he is allowed to keep on like he has been, that I will ... (more »)
 
kelles replied...
Dec. 17, 2009 at 1:59 pm :
you are the best one i think you can do anything you want .
 
crawfordkid This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 17, 2010 at 9:47 am :
JoCoGirl, I completely agree. If things get worse, I'm heading out to Australia...Get strong my friend! :-)
 
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RepVic said...
Aug. 6, 2009 at 1:54 am:
Okay. I've heard a million times that Obama would be a good president because, "he's our first black president." So what. I dislike Obama for a thousand reasons and not one of them is because he is black, but i think it is absolute CRAP that he be praised and chosen just because he would be our first black president. That's the only reason he won in the first place. Black votes and young white people who dont know what they're talking about and arent informed of important situations.... (more »)
 
xxxrEnxxxThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 6:43 pm :
I cant wait until 2012, when hopefully Herman Cain will be on the ballot. Im curious to see whether it'll affect votes at all considering he's black, and a Republican also. Maybe race did play a big role in the election. If so, we're in luck my friend. :)
 
BuddyJiles replied...
Feb. 2 at 9:15 pm :
What is wrong with socialism?
 
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HOPEMVP said...
Apr. 29, 2009 at 5:20 pm:
You presented your agrument more as a middle school student class opinion paper. I would however liked your presentation, not so much your topic.
 
_truth replied...
Oct. 14, 2010 at 10:10 pm :
ahah yess                     
 
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Juls said...
Feb. 17, 2009 at 11:15 pm:
nice to know a little about Barack. but i went for McCain. well he did want to make changes. Nice piece of writing.
 
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xalanahx said...
Feb. 12, 2009 at 2:43 am:
I was for McCain... But it kind of occurred to me that recently all Obama has been know as is, 'The first black/African American President'. It seems like people would rather he be known for his race more than the supposed 'change' he will bring. But overall, it was very good in writing.
 
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candieboo<3 said...
Jan. 25, 2009 at 5:17 am:
Well it really doesn't matter who dislikes him, he's here for 4 years, 8 if he's re-elected so yepp, sorry all that think old mccain should of won. I love my african american president though.

ps. dontcha think its nice to have some first kids in the white house for a change =]] i love itt!


-candice
 
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EverlastingWords said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 10:13 pm:
How? What has this country come to. Your writing was excellent but your opinion appalled me! I was sent aghast. I am only supposed to comment you on writing so well done with getting your point across, but i think you need more numerical facts instead of statements he said. I am not getting into politics, but Obama is the end of the wonderful 50 states of America as we know it (or according to him, in an actual TV show where he was making a speech he said "I have visited 57 states in Americ... (more »)
 
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Jess B. said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 1:50 am:
This subject is obviouslly quite controversial...I, for one, do not agree with many of Obama's ideas and beliefs. However, I don't think McCain would have been that much better anyways.

Thanks for being bold enough to share your thoughts and take the heat. Although I do not agree with you, I say, Bravo!

- Jess B.
 
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skaterGurl17 said...
Jan. 24, 2009 at 1:36 am:
i dislike Obama!
i wanted McCain!!!!!!!!!
 
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artofthedeath said...
Jan. 23, 2009 at 12:36 am:
You only talked about Obama. In your opening paragraph, you made it seem like you were going to compare the two candidates. Although McCain was not the bst qualified for president, Obama had less experience that he did. I don't think like you. But hey, we all have our differences.
You sounded a little monotone the whole time.
 
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Alexxx said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 7:24 pm:
WOW Kitty Obama didnt become president until yesterday and you posted the comment
 
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TheVoice said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 7:19 pm:
Totally agree! Yeah, we may lose some things, but we will gain much more. In this big econamic crisis we're in he really is the thing we need. Of course, the whole race issue has caused some conflict, but it's about time America looked past that and focus on what he can do instead. What most peolpe don't get is that, now that he is president, we are going to need to play our role in this epic recovery. LIke, we can't just sit back and think, "Oh, thank god. He's president. He'll fix everyth... (more »)
 
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Rise said...
Jan. 21, 2009 at 4:28 pm:
I am very scared on your points, you beleive that if the troops come back well save our money, that might be true, but if the troops aren't in Iraq and Iran, the terrorists WILL come back to haunt us, and I think you know what i mean by that people. Also, if we make schools less expensive, the schools will run out of buisness because of low payment. And shouldn't we let the states handel their own school programs?
 
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ezsmilesannemarie said...
Dec. 22, 2008 at 7:49 pm:
I sooo agree with you. It's going to help our country so much now that Obama is president. He is going to be the best president we've had in a long time. Experience or no experience, McCain isn't fit.
 
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EnglishAreBetterEducatedThanTheAmericans said...
Dec. 15, 2008 at 9:47 am:
Please tell me that most of you are under the age of nine???!!?? Or that you did not go to school because your spelling is really poor. Hopfully Obama will get you all educated properly.
 
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SCHOOLROCKS said...
Dec. 8, 2008 at 2:06 pm:
my family is demcrat but this year I THINK THAT MCCAIN SHOULD OF WON( even if he is replikin I DONT LIKE HOw HE PICK AS VP BUT MCCain whould be a great presindint
 
ConstanceContraireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 23 at 3:15 pm :
PLEASE SPELL CORRECTLY SCHOOLROCKS 
 
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poopoo said...
Dec. 1, 2008 at 5:21 pm:
u rox man!!!
 
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live love laugh said...
Dec. 1, 2008 at 3:04 pm:
i was not for obama at all at first i was for ron paul, but then i turned when mccain he had alot of good points but obama if you didnt know is friends with terroist!!! i am very scared when obama enters the white house , i feel that something bad will happen!!! why would you what a person that is friends terroist in office!! come on now he is saying that he is going to take away our guns why in the world would you want someone to take your guns!!!
 
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kitty said...
Dec. 1, 2008 at 8:05 pm:
I think you are right. So far he has been a good president. I think the teacher's should get the same amount of money as they do now.
 
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wondergrl95 said...
Nov. 24, 2008 at 5:01 pm:
OBAMA!!!! The white house is headed for a new direction. I am so happy, my mom cried when she heard the news. I have never been that involved in a presidential election, and I can't even vote yet!
 
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lil b. said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 12:38 am:
OBAMA is our 1st African American President of the United States of America! I went for him and he won, he did a good job on his speech, which I thought was a good one. GO OBAMA and good luck! WOOOOO!Pr
 
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lil b. said...
Nov. 14, 2008 at 12:35 am:
i went for obama because i thought he would be an alright person to be president. plus, he is the 1st african american president here in the U.S. of AMERICA! GO OBAMA!!! he is doing good deeds for people who need good needs.Pr
 
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gal4obama said...
Nov. 6, 2008 at 12:01 am:
Obama is our president now! and I think that is the best possible thing for our country-...we are now in two wars, in the worst financial situation since the Great Depression, millions are homeless, millions of educated people can't afford college, the environment is in a horrible state..etc...OBAMA WILL CHANGE ALL THAT! He is going to turn around our economy and end the war in Iraq. I am so happy that he won the election.
 
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homeschooler said...
Nov. 1, 2008 at 2:23 am:
ok. so i am all for obama. thats who my parents are voteing for. he would be the the perfect president if it wernt for this one thing. educating childeren at a young age. i have been raised, and everyone i know has been raised, to learn your math, sience, spelling, ect, when you think you are ready. you see, i didnt learn how to read and write till i was nine, beacaus thats when i wanted to learn. two months later, i was an edvanced reader for my age. i was home schooled. lots of peopol think th... (more »)
 
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bagpiper said...
Oct. 27, 2008 at 7:18 pm:
Sorry; I am not convinced of obama's presidential worthiness or economic thriftiness. Obama has spent wasteful amounts of money on his campain. If he really cared about people in our country; then he could give money to our neighbors who are losing their homes and are in other such crises. McCainj has pledged not to spend over 85,000; that's why we don't see too much of him. McCain has my vote.
 
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Shane_Zeh_Banderbear said...
Oct. 27, 2008 at 12:09 am:
Hm. I do like most of his plans, ideas, and beliefs. Only one thing I don't like; 'Spreading the Wealth.' That's very unfair to very successful people. As for just about everything else, I agree. As for what Obama4President said: Yeah, most of us probably arent eligible to vote. We're teenagers. Lol. Some of us do understand politics believe it or not; I'm 13, and I know the two arguments and stand points on the important issues regarding both candidates. It's just as important to us as to a... (more »)
 
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bookworm013 said...
Oct. 24, 2008 at 11:20 pm:
It would be more helpful if you could compare the two-there are good and bad points in both campaigns, and I also feel that your article only adressed your needs.
 
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bagpiper said...
Oct. 23, 2008 at 6:26 pm:
Sorry; I am not convinced of Barack Obama's presidential worthiness and economic thriftiness. Obama refused to sign a pledge when he was nominated as the Democratic candidate to limit donations to his prsidential campaign. McCain did and that is why you don't see too much of him. Obama will end up spending more than 150 million in ads and such that is all donated. That does not show me proper financial management on his part. Obama could give that money to people across our country who need it, ... (more »)
 
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DiamondsandRoses said...
Oct. 22, 2008 at 12:16 am:
What he says may sound, but we must NOT hand over the United States to the democrats! It would be a big mistake. I'm not FOR McCain, I don't like either one of them. But if I could vote, I would vote for McCain, so that the country will be in a republican's hands.
 
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RabbitHoleExplorador said...
Oct. 21, 2008 at 1:19 am:
Vote for HOPE!!!
 
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