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Twilight on Equality Magazine

It wouldn’t be an exaggeration to say that while reading Twilight I was “dazzled” (pun intended). Almost anyone alive for the past couple of months is certainly aware of the saga, which has received excited acclaim not only from teenagers worldwide but also such esteemed reviewers as The New York Times and Publishers Weekly. So why do I have a problem with it?

Twilight is about Bella Swan, a teen who moves to a new town and is immediately adored by everyone. She instantly has several men vying for her attention and a couple of pretty nice friends as well. Her adoration of classic books would imply that she is at least marginally intelligent. Then she meets Edward Cullen (who has a unique background that is not relevant here), and as their relationship grows, so does her obsession, until it consumes her. Seems harmless, right?

Actually, no. Bella is depicted as an evil temptress trying to persuade a morally honorable man into evil, while he attempts to keep their virtues intact. Succinctly, Edward and Bella are a modern Adam and Eve.

But the book goes further in asserting that women are inferior to men. Every time Bella is faced with a conflict and has to make a choice, Edward swoops in to save her, because apparently she can’t possibly decide on her own. He goes beyond protective to borderline abusive in Twilight, but Bella justifies it as “love” every time. When Edward dumps her for a couple months in New Moon, Bella ­becomes seriously depressed and dangerous to herself.

All the female characters in this series eventually portray similar helplessness. Even the first relationship introduced in the book – that of Bella’s ­mother and stepfather – is sexist. Bella expresses concern about leaving her mother, but then reasons that it’s okay now that Phil is looking after her.

What’s even more ridiculous is that many female readers look up to Bella! Her situation is idealized. After finding Edward, Bella is happy only when she is with him. She feels that he is her one true purpose in life. So what are girls who read the novels left wanting? Their own Edward, of course! Not only do they want one – they need one. The fact that so many intelligent young men and women have been sucked into the Twilight series and have swallowed its sexist manifesto has me worried about the future of gender equality.

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HENSLEYRosalyn27 said...
Feb. 6 at 7:51 pm:

Make your own life time easier take the business loans and all you need.

 
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BlueRainVIP said...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 4:22 pm:

It makes me laugh when I hear the argument that Twilight must be good because it made millions. Well.. so does the drug industry. People don't necessarily buy things because they're good, they buy them because they want them. And as Dumbledore once said "humans have knack for choosing the things that are worst for them."

 
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AinuSoulForger said...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 8:49 pm:

Well spoken!

 
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PumpkinscoutVIP said...
Sept. 12, 2011 at 11:46 am:

I only read the first one but they had too much romance for me...I am a bit squeamish haha nice article. I didn't read the whole series so I don't really have an opinion.

 
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LazyDaisyLovesYouVIP said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 1:24 am:

Wow I didn't even notice the sexist parts! Good job writing that down!

 
LazyDaisyLovesYouVIP replied...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 1:25 am :

And personally, I'm not huge on Edward. I like Jacob better! 

 
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V!)! said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:17 am:

Anone who wants some origional fantasy with a strong  female protagionist needs to read any of Tamora Pierce's novels.

 
fire_ice4everVIP replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:16 pm :

Oh I so agree with you! If Bella ran into Alanna in a forest...she'd have another thing coming! :) 

 
bookthiefVIP replied...
Jan. 17 at 1:30 pm :

:) Absolutely.

 
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Halcyon said...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 11:10 am:

GAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! No...More...Sappy vampire books!!!!! Oh no, There's another one! They're multiplying! Oh, the horror!!!!

 
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americanteen97 said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 10:41 pm:

I wanted to aplogize for my earlier, rudeness. I fully realize your point and sorry my little 12 year old self was being so rude. I've changed directions and agree with you :)

 
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radicalhonestyVIP said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 3:51 pm:

I totally agree. when bella gets dumped, she's nothing without Edward. She has nightmares, doesn't pay attention to her friends, even rejects her dad and Jacob when they to help her. Bella reasons this saying "I can't live without him." There is also a line that bothers me that says "I dont want my soul without you." or something like that. This is an extremeley unhealthy relationship. And then bell tries to get edward to have s.e.x with her! even when he doesnt want to! i realize now im babblin... (more »)

 
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K.M.S.ShearVIP said...
Jun. 16, 2011 at 7:57 am:

I never thought of the book in this way. I can see what your saying but I dont exactly agree with it.

 
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BreL. said...
May 27, 2011 at 10:05 pm:

I apologize for the typo, I meant everything.

 
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BreL. said...
May 27, 2011 at 10:02 pm:

I completely get what you are saying, i think we all sometimes have the tendency to really forget things that are important and really matter. And i'm not saying Twilight doesn't matter but it's best to keep everythong in check, I know I sure have to!

 
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fire_ice4everVIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 11:38 pm:

Great article!! I totally agree with you!

Just as a side note but is anyone else starting to get a bit annoyed by all the vampire craziness? Before Twilight I used to love fantasy (HP nerd) but now I have to physically search to find a book that's not a variation on Twilight. Also the whole T.v and movie craze on this is getting annoying. I miss the days of Buffy being the gist of all this...

 
WindDancerVIP replied...
May 26, 2011 at 12:33 pm :

I agree. (And I LOVE HARRY POTTER, too.) I have read the twilight series and just don't see much substance in them. I agree that fantasy is getting less original- I am fine with borrowing from myths and legends and old tales, and working off that, but it has to be unique.

 
fire_ice4everVIP replied...
May 26, 2011 at 5:18 pm :

I agree. We need some fresh material, if HP had been a copy of Merlin it wouldn't have been as good. The reason it's beloved is because it's unlike anything ever. 

 
Hejlna replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 10:48 am :

i have to dissagree with harry potter being unlike anything else. the series is qlmost anexact copy of lord of the rings. ( ie dark lord and magical creatures as well as many impending wars) but its still a great series And i would be lying if i said it wasn't.

 
fire_ice4everVIP replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 12:14 pm :

Hm, I never got into lord or the rings so I wouldn't know. But maybe I'll check them out. (I'm in desperate need of a fantasy book that isn't vampire related.) :D

 
hejlna replied...
Jul. 8, 2011 at 1:14 pm :

same here!!!!!!!

 
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theavatarVIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 11:22 pm:

4 thumbs up....really good :) keep writing. when i began reading the saga, i was obsessed with it. now that i look back, i feel lyk it was stupid, i mean i used to argue over jacob and edward..............but ya, u r right about  bella...i believe she is morally incorrect

 
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rockstardreamVIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 10:08 am:

I've considered the Romeo and Juliet viewpoint as well- people describe Twilight as forbidden love, do they not? Romeo and Juilet was described the same way!

 
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rockstardreamVIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 10:07 am:

I will be honest in saying I am an absolute, big fan of the saga- I'm a holder of the merchandise, have read all four books, been to DVD release parties...but my obsession has not lead to oblivian. I dislike Bella- very much so. In the books she is portrayed as a helpless damsel-in-distress who can't fight her own battles. It irritates me that she is so dependant on this man in her life (Edward) that she neglects to pay attention to any of her friends and family, as well as endangering them at t... (more »)

 
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crazy_poet42 said...
May 25, 2011 at 8:45 am:

I wonder if perhaps the problem is not wholly that the Twilight books present such a questionable situation, but that young girls in particular take it as truth. I'm all for connecting with a book, for feeling like the main character (or a minor character) in some way; that's what makes a story powerful. But there is still a fine line between fiction and reality, and characters are carefully constructed creations of an author, not human beings. The fault lies not only with Twilight, although som... (more »)

 
GreaserVIP replied...
May 25, 2011 at 9:11 am :

Okay, you have know idea how many times I wanted to throw the book agains the wall everytime Edward had to swoop down and save her or she acted so helpless.  I wanted to yell, "Get a spine!'

 
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FeelTheRomance18VIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 8:40 am:

AGREED!          

 
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FeelTheRomance18VIP said...
May 25, 2011 at 8:33 am:

I completely agree with this. although you left on out: how old edward is compared to bella. this brings us to how 12 year olds were married off to 40 year olds way back in the day by most religions, including the mormon. stefani meyers is mormon, so i suppect she is weaving her own beliefs into her writing to teach us the ways of her religion(not that theirs anything wrong with mormons. I have a few mormon friends).

 
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AsIAmVIP said...
May 3, 2011 at 10:01 am:

Personally I think Twilight is the modern fantasy version of Romeo and Juliet.  Is it slightly ridiculous? Yes.  But I think the intelligent girls out there will grow to realize an Edward is not what they want, and if they don't have the confidence to be equal to their partner, well I hope they find somebody like Edward who won't take advantage of it.

 

Not saying your points aren't valid - I think they are - I'm just saying this isn't a new thing, and it won't be... (more »)

 
genius230 replied...
May 17, 2011 at 10:18 pm :

you have a good point it may be like romeo and juliet annd in the end they might die in breaking dawn

 
writeratheart16 replied...
May 27, 2011 at 7:20 pm :

I agree that Twilight is a bit like Romeo and Juliet, but in Juliet's time, being helpless and having the man do all the work was the custom. Women weren't ALLOWED to do anything, so they were forced to become damsels-in-distress. That kind of thinking expired with the feminist movement, and making young girls believe in it is only tearing down all those years of work for equality for women. So although I see your point, I think this piece also has a strong point.

 
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vampierVIP said...
May 3, 2011 at 7:53 am:

well i thank that who ever did this article. i do not like at all becuse i love the twlilght saga it isan grate story to read i thank but i dont thank that kidzs under 11 shuold read this book it's more of an love story than any thang. i thank :) so next time you wont to amke an comment about something do more resurch on it.......OK.......!!!!!

 
FeelTheRomance18VIP replied...
May 25, 2011 at 8:37 am :

they obviously HAVE done research on it. it is a credible point and i agree. I have no problem with twihards but please look at the facts.

 
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TayrlSVIP said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 10:01 pm:

I think that although all of the critism the series is getting, I DID read it and I have to admit, I was sucked in. Meyer may be talented and some people need to take a step back and stop scrutinising the plot so hard. How dramatic we all are!

I'm not saying that some of the issues in the book aren't there, I definately agree that Edward is an exaggerated version of the female fantasy, but isn't that the point? ITS A STORY. You shouldn't take it so seriously that all the events have to... (more »)

 
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xelawriter97VIP said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 9:05 pm:

While I do agree that some of the aspects of Twilight are demoralizing towards women, I don't agree completely with some of the things you said. Although Bella does feel that Edward is her true purpose in life, Edward feels the same for Bella. He says his life is meaningless without her. Plus, one of the things that Edward says he loves about her is that she is a caretaker - she takes care of others and is independent. (She only says her mother will be okay will Phil because she knows her mot... (more »)

 
TayrlSVIP replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 10:03 pm :

agreed!!!!

 
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BrightBurningCampeadorVIP said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 7:19 pm:

I'm reading this article and various comments and geuss what ad is on the side? "First Bite: a personalized vampire romance novel...where you are the star. Fall in love with your own Edward... live the fantasy... click for a free demo" Talk about ironic.

 
TayrlSVIP replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 9:54 pm :

haha similar story here, but for "Second Life" where it depicts three different avatars that closly resemble Bella, Edward and James figures. Coincidence? I think not:P

 
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BrightBurningCampeadorVIP said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 7:14 pm:

I don't like the whole "dark fantasy" fad that's going on. I love fantasy, but it seems to that authors are using it more and more as an excuse to write dumb cliched stories. Innocent girl meets dark mysterious guy and instantly falls in love. But then dark mysterious guy goes away for some reason and innocent girl is left heartbroken on the street corner. But oh wait! The dark mysterious guy comes back and the two live happily ever after! Isn't that beautiful!

 
BlueRainVIP replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 4:02 pm :

Yup. And we don't have to even read the book to uncover the mystery. You read the back cover and it says "Of three things I was absolutely certain. 1: Edward was (bad use of grammar, since it's not past tense) a vampire. Blah blah, he thirsted for my blood (isn't that what vampires do?...) 3: I was in love with him. Great. Story ended. The mystery of the first half of the book is a complete waste because you just gave it away. And if you read the table of contents, the titles of the chapters giv... (more »)

 
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Jaynebugs said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 4:58 pm:

I totally agree with everything in this article. I'm tired of girls being seen as the damsels in distress. We need more kick booty women role models like Buffy! (Did anyone ever watch the Buffy tv series? It was awesome!)

 
BlueRainVIP replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 4:04 pm :

There's a movie coming out called Brave, I think it's made by the same people who did How to Train Your Dragon, but it's a red-headed girl who is the hero. No sparkly fairy boys included.

 
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pinkhottie265 said...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 10:06 am:

I <3 the Twilight saga! Stephenie Meyer is the best author alive. But the second book (New Moon) made me really sad, so that one was my least favorite.

 
xxxrEnxxxVIP replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 6:01 pm :

You're kidding, right? Best author alive? Have you ever even read Stephen King, JK Rowling, Darren Shan, etc? SMeyer is probably one of the worst writers of this decade.

 
xelawriter97VIP replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 9:07 pm :

although I don't think that she is the BEST AUTHOR ALIVE... I do LOVE her work, and I think she has the potential to write something absolutely amazing. (Twilight, although I LOVE IT - im obsessed - wasn't very well written) but Meyer has potential.

 
AspiringauhorVIP replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 3:21 pm :

Yeah, have you read her novel The Host? It's pretty intense. :)

 
xelawriter97VIP replied...
Apr. 18, 2011 at 7:18 pm :

omg yes.... ITS SOOOO GOOD

 
AspiringauhorVIP replied...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 3:23 pm :

Yeah I know! I loved it.

 
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AspiringauhorVIP said...
Mar. 20, 2011 at 2:02 pm:

Some people just want a good romance and don't have to turn it into something horrible and demeaning to women as you just did. Some girls (myself included) are simply just not emotionally or physically strong enough to protect themselves from all harm. As much as I wish I was able to be tough, I'm not. I'm petite (as Bella is) and emotionally fragile (as Bella is.) At the sight of a needle or blood, I start breathing heavily. It's not that I am not feminist (you'd better bet I am!!!!!), but that... (more »)

 
BrightBurningCampeadorVIP replied...
Apr. 11, 2011 at 7:08 pm :

I am sure you aren't as helpless as you are making out. Everyone has their own strengths and everyone has their own weaknesses, but from the little I read of the Twilight books Bella has no strengths and lots of weaknesses.

 
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