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We are a country founded on the many cultures that are drawn here by the promise of a better life. Historically, we have prided ourselves on being a cultural melting pot. However, the increasing number of illegal immigrants is becoming a problem. An illegal immigrant is someone who has either entered a country without permission or who, after being granted entry, has stayed beyond the allowed time. And although many think this is a uniquely American problem, it is also happening in many prosperous countries in Europe.

This raises an interesting moral conflict, because although illegal immigrants have broken the law, they are ­often forced to do so out of a desperate need to survive and support their ­families.

Why is immigration considered such a large problem in our country? A common concern is that illegal immigrants put financial burdens on our schools and hospitals, and often do not pay their share of taxes. Another concern is that illegal immigrants take jobs away from American citizens.

Many solutions have been suggested – from increasing border control and installing fences, to granting amnesty – but so far not one has solved the problem. If we increase border control and install fences, we are simply slowing the problem. Furthermore, that would be very expensive and, based on past experience, not very effective. It also has a negative ecological impact, ­disrupting animal migration and the natural flow of rivers. Conversely, by granting amnesty to all, we are rewarding lawbreakers, which will possibly encourage more people to enter illegally. We tried this tactic in 1986, granting amnesty to 2.7 million illegal immigrants. Before this, 140,000 people ­immigrated here illegally each year; now there are 700,000.

Many suggest ways of slowing or avoiding the problem, but in reality we need to end it. To do this, we have to tackle it at the source. We must eliminate the reasons people enter the U.S. illegally. Primarily they come for jobs. Many businesses will hire cheap labor so they can sell their products at lower prices and stay competitive. Employers who hire illegal immigrants benefit at others’ expense. They contribute to the problem by creating a demand for illegal immigrants. We need to make them responsible for their actions and at the same time find ways to solve their problems.

My solution to immigration begins with eliminating incentives for people to come to America illegally. To do this, we must increase and enforce the penalties for employers who hire illegal immigrants. If employers don’t lure illegal immigrants here with jobs, then they may be less likely to try to get ­into our country illegally. On the ­positive side, there would be more jobs for legal citizens and only people who pay taxes would use our schools and hospitals.

Arizona sets an example of this proposed solution. On January 1, 2008, that state introduced a law that any business knowingly hiring an illegal immigrant will have its business license suspended. For the second offense, the license will be canceled. This may seem severe, but experience shows that penalties must be substantial to be effective.

Arizona may be a role model for the rest of the United States. However, because it has just implemented this law, we do not know how effective it will be, nor do we know what unforeseen aftershocks will result. I believe, though, that there is reason to be positive, because if we are to have a noticeable impact on this problem, we must have significant penalties for employers.

However, as with every solution, my proposed answer may spark new obstacles. If employers do not hire the cheap labor of illegal immigrants, they will have to hire American citizens who will probably demand a higher wage. As a result, products will be more expensive and consumers will pay higher prices. In response to this problem, the states should form committees with the brightest people in the immigration and economics fields to work with ­employers to help solve their employment needs and mitigate the effects on the economy. The committees would work with legislators to draft laws so businesses do not have to hire people illegally in order to compete.

My solution is focused on trying to come up with an immediate response to this problem. If we look at the big picture, however, the only long-term solution to illegal immigration is to think globally and realize the problem extends beyond our borders. To do this, we need to help neighboring countries balance their population growth with their resources, including food and housing. In this regard, the United States can play an important leadership role by providing direct help and by being a good role model.

Mexico’s population is growing at a rate that surpasses its economic capacity. About 40 percent of its population lives below the poverty level. As a result, Mexicans are in desperate need of jobs and income; thus, many immigrate to the United States. Eighty percent of people immigrating to the United States are from Mexico and Central America.

In conclusion, tightening borders may slow illegal immigration, but it is not a solution. If people want to come, they will find a way. Therefore, we must get rid of the reasons that illegal immigrants come to our country and establish incentives for employers not to hire them. We also must balance population growth so that in the future we have a world shared equally between people and the environment. To do this we need to look and think ­beyond our borders, and into the ­future, so this problem can disappear into the past.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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sugey1994 said...
Jan. 12 at 3:37 pm:
First of all i would like to point out that illegal immigrants are not taking any ones jobs. Many farms in Georgia are loosing crops and money because they are no longer hiring Latinos, and the Americans on unemployment are not willing to perform that hard work. The next fact is that if the labor was better paid, Americans would be paying $20 per salad, and im sure no one wants that. And the drugs are coming in because of all the Americans consuming them....if there was not demand the supply w... (more »)
 
Lisa Chavez replied...
Jan. 18 at 1:50 pm :
Thank you! Finaaly someone that isn't ignorant like the rest of the people commenting. Its sad that people are blaming immigrants for being here and stealing jobs.. What the heck? Which is not true. I never seen an American working in the fields, sweating, and waking early in the morning and not even working minimum wage. Sadly, people so ignorant like this persom that wrote this essay don't see or undersnand what we go threw. Hopefully one day these people open thier eyes and think about what t... (more »)
 
IzziButterflyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26 at 11:13 am :
Well, the person who wrote this clearly has no idea what it's like for an illegal immigrant. You have NO idea. I'm a citizen, but put yourself in the illegal immigrant's shoes. Or, put yourself in the shoes of a child citizen whose parents are illegal. Life is tough, huh? I completely disagree with this article.
 
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proudlyhispanic! said...
Jan. 9 at 1:48 am:
just remember... every time u pick up an apple, orange, or ur gonna eat ur salad..that if it werent for the imiigrants you wouldnt have it.. they are the one that cultivated them, picked them and thanks to them you can have that snack any time u like.!!!! just think about it. and dont forget ..whether u like it or not, there will ALWAYS be immigrants in the u.s
 
FlashlevitationThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 26 at 5:07 pm :
I really like this comment! Really clever!
 
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cristy said...
Jan. 4 at 2:20 pm:
i think ppl who comment about mexicans being ugly. are haters and that we steal all the good jobs.. no.. we actually get upp in the morning and get to work like we sopouse to do.. the rest of the other ppl who are saing that we steal the jobs sleep allll day and dont do nothing with their life.. just let their life go to waste.. just my opinion
 
sophie1994 replied...
Jan. 5 at 10:18 am :
i soo agree to it is so truee :)
 
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andieyupThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 4 at 1:01 pm:
ignorant and racist article attitudes like this is a disgrace to human nature
 
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Runner said...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 5:51 pm:
I'm sorry Arizona is a model state...?
 
Runner replied...
Dec. 13, 2011 at 5:57 pm :
Our entire produce industry is reliant on illegal immigrants. 75% were born outside of the United States, 50% illegally immigrated. Most Americans would not be willing to take these farm jobs with substandard wages, risk of poisoning from pesticides, with no vacation time or health benefits.
 
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Derek Carson said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 1:05 pm:
My opinion on this topic is quite extensive.  I do agree on the fact that if man wants to do something they will find a way whether there is a consequence or not.  I also agree entirely that laws should be passed to prohibit giving away jobs to illegal immigrants for less salary.  This is unfair because the illegal foreigners are being treated better than the American citizen just because Americans ask for a better salary to live.  That’s the same reason M... (more »)
 
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savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 11:13 pm:
Kate, I really appreciate this article because for once someone has offered a solution that doesn't just blast the immigrants on how wrong they are.  Many privileged people complain about how they're taking jobs, ect. without taking into consideration the kind of situation the the immigrants are in.  Your solution benefits everyone involved, America, the businesses, and the immigrants.  So thank you! :)
 
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Liv297This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 6:02 pm:
to smile moment: I'd like to point out that there is no possible way the US has 55 trillion dollars of debt. At any given time, there is only 27 trillion dollars in circulation.
 
iamnotwhoisay replied...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 11:26 am :
Right now the debt is $15,104,187,000,000. When I started typing this reply it was 2 million dollars less. It's rapidly growing second by second.
 
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ThePeaceDaisyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 30, 2011 at 12:26 am:
I hope you realize that we're not a country...the land is the country. We just live in the country.
 
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valery_o07 said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 11:06 am:
I believe the most productive states of usa were mexico's land and if we would have our territories back, the ones that are in the gulf of mexico, mexico wouldn't have to share petrolium. More than a problem, us citizen should recognize the millions of dollars that ilegal people apport to the economy each year.
 
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femin gonsalez said...
Sept. 16, 2011 at 8:46 am:
this article is bored
 
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Bambi67This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 3, 2011 at 2:53 pm:
i feel like i read this article twice...
 
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SmileMomentThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 30, 2011 at 11:13 pm:
Yes, however, it is not America's problem that Mexico is poor. Try getting a job in my town as a teen and it's close to impossible because illigal immigrants have come here and taken the jobs that should go to American citizens. Coming to another country and stealing their jobs and taking advantage of their welfare systom, no matter how no the cause, is wrong.
 
ConstanceContraireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 30 at 12:45 pm :
Umm we contributed to their poverty
 
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giobmw509 said...
May 24, 2011 at 1:16 pm:
your story is like the same as mine. exactly the same. my parents brough me here for a better life than they had when they were in mexico. my parents started working since they were little and they dont want my future to be like theirs. they want me to success. im 17 right now and lived here in the united states my whole life now. i consider myself a proud mexican/american(:
 
radicalhonestyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 9:35 am :
for those out there who only see the American side, you should read Illegal by Bettina Restrepo. It is a bit of light reading, and it does not explain illegal immigration, it just simply tells the story from an illegal immigran'ts point of view. As for me, I firmly believe illegal immigration must be stopped, though I do understand why it is happening. but america should help its own people, some of which who are also starving and living below the poverty line, before it helps foreign law... (more »)
 
radicalhonestyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 9:36 am :
oops sorry, did not mean my comment to be a reply
 
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Yamini said...
Apr. 15, 2011 at 11:13 am:
It's funny you should mention this since mexicans, and indians lived in the united states before americans..... Just thought you should know
 
radicalhonestyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 9:38 am :
Since we are talking about mexicans, i would like to point out that we won the land from Mexico fare and square. All Mexicans were given a choice, retreat to the new Mexican bounderies, or stay. So now, the land is rightfully ours, not Mexico's.
 
MidnightSolThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 6:30 pm :
The land may have been won from mexico, and the mexicans then may have been given a choice, but that was then.  The mexicans, who are now struggling to survive, are doing so because of a choice that was made by an ancestor of theirs. 
 
radicalhonestyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 20, 2011 at 8:15 pm :
There are many countries struggling, not just Mexico, because of poor choices made by former leaders. We are talking about a current issue, and we can never get anywhere if people keep looking back at the past and trying to erase it. 
 
ForeignShowFan replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 9:29 am :
Well, some people say that although we won some land fare and square, we took more than we said we would. Besides, if I come to you house with guns, bust down the door, and start screaming, "Get out of here, you live in the dog house now" how would you feel?
 
ConstanceContraireThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 30 at 12:52 pm :
radicalhonesty i would like to point out that we did not win the land, we stole it. I think that a better way of saying it is the Mexicans stole the land from the Native Americans and the United States stole it from the Meixcans. 
 
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SmileMomentThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 6:49 pm:
As much as I don't completely agree with  all of your plan, I agree with most of the article. Illigal immigrants/ undocumented aliens should not be allowed to walk right into a country and take away jobs from the countries rightful citizens. No matter how desperate that person is, it is selfish and wrong to impose upon others in this way.
 
JoJo replied...
Jun. 15, 2011 at 12:13 am :
Look at it this way, You Live In Mexico, you have a family of 2 children and your spouse. You are the only income in your family making 700 pesos a week the same as $70 here in the U.S.A. That is no enough to support a family. You kids are starving and then you here obout people coming to the U.S.A and making $300 a week. See why people are almost forced to come to the U.S.A. That is not being selfish.
 
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 20, 2011 at 5:05 pm :
I find it funny how people are saying the illegal immigrants "stole" the jobs. No, they were employed by Americans to do jobs that most Americans hate to do-- lawn work, construction, etc. If you have a problem with illegal immigrants "stealing" your jobs, then blame the people who employed them, not the immigrants.
 
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K.a.t.h.l.e.e.n. said...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 3:17 pm:
Wow, this piece is excellent!! I think your solution makes a lot more sense than putting up an expensive fence! Very informative, and well thought out, keep writing!!
 
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mexican power said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
mexican power
 
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DreamcandleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 3, 2011 at 8:44 pm:
I really like your writing style, even though I only half agree with your points.  But hey, this is the point of view section.  It's okay to disagree.  Personally, I agree that the way to end this is to stop the cause of why undocumented people (sorry I hate the word "alien" so much...) come here.  However, instead of closing up jobs and such (though we could still use it in some ways), the real answer is ending poverty.  And this doesn't just relate to illegal immigrant... (more »)
 
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BrightBurningCampeadorThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 9:21 pm:

You present a veiw shared by many, but not me. We Americans enjoy one of the highest standards of living in the world. You can talk about the "poverty line" and "incentives" to come here, but I don't think you really understand how most of the world lives. I wonder how you would feel if you were in their position.

We have no moral right to deny these people a better life. And even if we did we would be stuck with a problem. "Illegal immigrants" (please, the the correct term is "undocum... (more »)

 
SmileMomentThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 24, 2011 at 6:43 pm :
United State's Total National Debt is currently over $55,000,000,000,000. Sending money to other countries when we currently have none ourselves is, let us face it, extremely unwise. Before a jewler can sell a golden ring he must have the gold to make it with. Before America does any excess spending, they need to make sure they are out of debt. If you researched yhou would find that when, for instance, Mexico is billions of dollars in debt, the U.S. is trillions of dollars in debt. If&... (more »)
 
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splinteredsunlightThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 5:00 pm:
I think this is a pretty selfish opinion. This is rampant American greed based on entitlement. There are a limited amount of resources in the world, and the fair thing to do is to spread it around. Mexicans have a far lower average standard of living than Americans, so of course they'll want to seek a better life. But even in these efforts, illegal immigrants are, for the most part, in the lowest income range among those living in the U.S. The fact that our lowest standard is better than anythin... (more »)
 
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Debanhi said...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 12:51 pm:
first of all its not "illegal immigtrants" the correct term is undocumented! and undocumented people are not taking anyone's jobs away they are doing the jobs many american citizens dont want to do!
 
JORDANM replied...
Apr. 19, 2011 at 4:00 pm :
Yes that is true about the jobs, but crossing the border is illegal in the first place. If an American crossed the border illegally they would be treated much more harshly and be deproted immediatly.
 
brianna replied...
Aug. 29, 2011 at 7:19 pm :
I really dissagree with what you said about them taking jobs away from us. They usually get a job no one else wants, getting stuck with a horible job and very little pay just to put food on their family's table, and also I belive that, in many cases they help out economy because many of them come here to make businesses. Although not all of them are here for a good reason, I still beleive that many of them deserve to stay.
 
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Pizza HuT said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:19 am:
I AM YOUR MOTHER
 
the situation replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:39 am :
now thats a situation
 
PHILL replied...
Mar. 2, 2011 at 3:35 pm :
U SUCK PIZZA HUT IS NASTY
 
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WABAKIEESS said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:17 am:
 I AM YOUR FATHER!!!!!
 
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TRAVIS said...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:10 am:
HI MY PEOPLE.
 
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Dickies said...
Feb. 28, 2011 at 12:52 pm:
i hated black people
 
christine carillo replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:16 am :
i hate them 2
 
Dickies replied...
Mar. 1, 2011 at 11:19 am :
i hated beaners too
 
be realistic replied...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 5:39 pm :
^^^^^ possibly some of the most ignorant people that can speak english.
 
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