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The Mirage

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AngelFire
The Mirage
Summary: Marci's sister Valerie has vanished, but not without a trace. Bits of evidence are found, piece by piece. Eventually a body is uncovered. Valerie. The police suspect suicide but everything is not what it seems. Was it really suicide or premeditated homicide? It's up to Marci to solve the case when the police fail to read between the lines.





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Freckles3 said...
Nov. 15, 2012 at 5:48 pm
Really great story, but I think it should be made a little less obvious who did it. I knew the whole time. Still, I was captivated from Chapter One on!
 
Surobhi_Moitrayee said...
Feb. 14, 2012 at 5:39 am
Really nice please see my book too!
 
AddieLongo said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 2:13 pm
This is very good. I'm curious to where it's going to go. And the Marci girl...Ugh. I want to hit her. If I had a sister like that...lol You should check out my story as well :)
 
AngelFire replied...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 10:25 am
thanks and yeah i'll check out ur story :)
 

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