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The (Short) Story of Death and Jack

Annabelle M.
The (Short) Story of Death and Jack
Summary: Have you ever had encounters with death? What if you were told you were being personally hunted down? This is how 10-year-old Jack feels, and deals with his impending fate every day. While his friends play, Jack worries about how much longer he has until that cloaked specter comes for him.
That is, until one Halloween night, his only friend Brielle decides to teach him a lesson.

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zendagimigzaa said...
May 11, 2012 at 7:49 am

Your use of language is really amazing, it's very clear and varied, it makes it really easy to read.

I think elaborating your character's thoughts more might help, it doesn't make sense why Brielle treats Jack that way other than because the plot demands it. It seems a little out of character for someone to do that to someone they like, especially since she showed sympathy when he screamed earlier, and shows concern by asking her friend Lily about his parents.

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writinglikecrazy said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 7:51 pm

It is preety dark and tence but very well written


Leona123 said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 11:17 am

this is really dark and solemn Becca!!! but its good! :)



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