Vampire Goddess

June 18, 2011
By KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain


Summary:

"The less you know about me, the better everything will turn out."I told him.
"But, there's something different about you! What is it!"He asked, his eyes pleading.
I held up my hands, pain in my mouth.
"Nothing!"I snapped.
I spun around and dashed back inside, my fangs slid over my teeth and bottom lip. I felt thirsty, I needed blood. I slid down the wall and groaned. I was so weak. I was so hungry. I closed my eyes and groaned in hunger again. I needed to feed.


Kristine J.

Vampire Goddess


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bri-br said...
on Nov. 5 2014 at 4:28 pm
the first sentence got me hooked

ShyKarma GOLD said...
on Apr. 27 2013 at 3:40 pm
ShyKarma GOLD, Sedro Woolley, Washington
10 articles 10 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
when your in jail a good friend will be trying to bail you out. A best friend will be in the cell next to yours saying "Damn that was fun" - groucho marx

awsome     

on Apr. 22 2013 at 3:24 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

Of course!!!! not a problem!! As soon as I am able, I will!!!!

ShyKarma GOLD said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 5:33 pm
ShyKarma GOLD, Sedro Woolley, Washington
10 articles 10 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
when your in jail a good friend will be trying to bail you out. A best friend will be in the cell next to yours saying "Damn that was fun" - groucho marx

love the story could you write more chapters  

on Feb. 2 2013 at 9:57 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

Thank you so much! And I will definitey be wrting more as soon i get more inspiration(:

on Jan. 27 2013 at 10:19 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

I will definitey write more!!! as soon i possible can(: Thank you!!! just keep an eye out for more!!!

ShyKarma GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2013 at 11:56 pm
ShyKarma GOLD, Sedro Woolley, Washington
10 articles 10 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
when your in jail a good friend will be trying to bail you out. A best friend will be in the cell next to yours saying "Damn that was fun" - groucho marx

you should write more i want to know what will happen next :)

on Jun. 3 2012 at 2:13 am
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

I'm glad to hear that! I'll be working on it more!

on Sep. 23 2011 at 3:18 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

sure thing! ill get right on it!

on Aug. 13 2011 at 3:37 pm
emilybwrites SILVER, Villa Hills, Kentucky
5 articles 0 photos 112 comments

Favorite Quote:
last night i lay in bed, looking up at the stars and i thought to myself, where the heck is the ceiling?

great job i loved it! could you check out my peom "Forgotten Domain" and comment/rate! it would mean a lot!!!

on Jul. 12 2011 at 3:24 pm
ragstoriches BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
" I suffer from girlnextdooritis"~ Taylor Swift

I really enjoyed it! I never been such a fan of vampire novels, but now I think I'm changed! :) Keep it up!

on Jul. 11 2011 at 5:24 am
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
16 articles 5 photos 47 comments
I like your instinctive and imaginative work :D it had an atmosphere about it that keeps readers wanting more and more until they split into two :) keep going...I'll be keeping tabs on your work ahaa :D

on Jul. 2 2011 at 9:36 pm
KristySparklez BRONZE, Sterling, Colorado
2 articles 0 photos 53 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time only numbs all pain, it does not heal the wounds created by, nor does it heal the pain

thanks!!! i really appreciate it!!! ill be posting more as soon as i can!!!

on Jun. 23 2011 at 3:06 pm
Angelnight16 BRONZE, Heuvelton, New York
1 article 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"i used to be normal... until i met those people who i now call my friends."

i've only read the first chapter so far, and i think its sweet. only i think you might want to vary your word choice, and add a few more descriptions. but other than that keep up the good work!!




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