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Take the Night
Summary: Clare Baker had lost everything. She had no idea how her life could get any worse. But it did. Because Griffin came back for her. Not to kill her, but to take her. And now she doesn't know how she'll escape. Maybe she'll be forced to stay with Griffin. Forever.

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DirectingGabsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21 at 11:26 pm:
Amazingg.!!! Your writing is so... I don't know.. It just sounds REALLY good. I loved it.. And if no more chapters are posted soon, I think I will freak.. Just sayin(;
 
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Lacie101 said...
Jan. 13 at 8:18 pm:
wow that was amazing. i kept thinking during class "man if only this was a book i would finish it in one sitting" keep writing! you have talent!
 
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ShayleeMarThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 1 at 11:25 pm:
Really well written. I love it. Please keep writing! I want to read the rest.
 
Think4Ever replied...
Jan. 2 at 11:18 pm :
Thank you. :3 I'll be sure to keep working on it, but it takes a while for me to get a new chapter up sometimes.
 
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Akane-ReeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
This. Was. Incredible. KEEP ON WRITING OR ELSE THIS MAGAZINE WILL HAVE LOST AN AWESOME WRITER!!! <3
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 8:54 pm :
Thank you AKANE!!! You've made my entire week! You're awesome!! <33333
 
Akane-ReeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 10:00 pm :
I agree. JKKJKJKJK XD i do speak the truth, though.
 
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Fifteen_RosesThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 16, 2011 at 8:14 pm:
This is actually the best thing I've ever read on Teenink. Bravo :) Keep writing!
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 6:15 pm :
The BEST? Are you serious?! aldkfjsdfkljsdfklsj.  Endless smiles. =]]]]]]]]]
 
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TenshiNoYami said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 7:18 pm:
This is an amazing story...enough said there. I can't wait to read more!
 
TanazMasabaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 25, 2011 at 11:46 pm :
I have a feeling that the person narrating the story is the vampire....am I right?
 
Think4Ever replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 8:34 pm :
Actually, it isn't. You'll have to wait until the later chapters to find out who the narrator is.
 
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EpictacoqueenThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 11, 2011 at 4:54 pm:
I Really Loved this make more plzzz!!!!! omg plz D:
 
Think4Ever replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 8:36 pm :
I'm trying really hard to write more! (School keeps me busy.) I'll have the next chapter up soon.
 
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Think4Ever said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 12:53 am:
Note: If anybody noticed, I sort of changed the school name. I decided later that I would rather have a REAL school in a REAL town, so I went back and changed it... But it is still listed as Jargon's Academy in the earlier chapters.
 
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eMiLyP said...
Jul. 22, 2011 at 12:43 pm:
I really liked this story. I like how you did the point of view. It's creative and I like that. The plot seems interesting, too. I love stories about vampires and I'm writing one now. I don't like to advertise my writings though but if you wanna read it just let me know. : ) Please write more! This is really good.
 
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Jul. 25, 2011 at 12:21 am :
I'm glad you like it. And I would be happy to read your story if you would allow me to. I can't wait until I get to the part where the narrator of the story is revealed. I want to see what people think.
 
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Jul. 26, 2011 at 11:23 am :
I can't wait til you get to that part, too! I bet everyone will love it. I am in love with this story. And my stories are called The Vampire's Curse. There are 7 parts so it might just be easier to click on my name and go to my work than to try to hunt them down. : ) Thanks! I appreciate it.
 
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Jul. 27, 2011 at 5:46 pm :
No problem. I always love when people leave comments, and I reply to almost all of them. I'll be sure to read your work.
 
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Kvothe28This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 9:54 pm:
I thought this was really good. If you ever have time, could you read part of my novel "He Went Out with His Boots On," and tell me what you think?
 
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mooseimcold said...
Jul. 7, 2011 at 9:04 pm:
Dude. This is sick. (in a good way.) please continue to write more chapters.
 
Think4Ever replied...
Jul. 11, 2011 at 11:01 pm :
Um... Thanks! LOL. I try my best. =] And trust me, I'll be writing more.
 
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Tanaz_MasabaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 5, 2011 at 2:35 am:

just read chapter one...its pretty good but pls dont start talking directly to the reader while narrating the story. If you are writing in first person narrative, keep the story going in first person narrative. If the story is in third person narrative, keep going in third person narrative. Trust me, this is important.

And remember to read my story "Speak Now". I'd like to hear your opinion.

 
Tanaz_MasabaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 5:52 am :
where is chapter two??????
 
Think4Ever replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 7:47 pm :
The story actually is in first person, but the character who is telling the story hasn't been introduced yet. It's a surprise. I'm not finished with the second chapter. I actually didn't think it would get views so quickly, so I didn't worry about it. I'm glad you like it so far though!
 
highflyer101 replied...
Apr. 28, 2011 at 8:58 pm :
Actually, I've always kind of enjoyed when writers put in their opinion in a 3rd person story... I may be a nerd for saying this, but Charles Dickens did that in one of my favorite books, 'A Christmas Carol.' I love this storyline, and it's very close to me since I am depressed. I hope Jonathon didn't mean it! I also have a feeling that Clare has something deeper going on, too. (Note: I'm only on Chapter One.)
 
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