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HomeNot As It Seems
Not As It Seems
Summary: When Elizabeth (Lilly) James starts getting headaches she ignores it- until she blacks out and ends up in the hospital, or so everyone thinks. Seeing a boy in a dream she sets out with Adam, best friend and one sided love, to find the boy before he gets hurt or killed. In a thrilling adventure Lilly explores the other realms and realizes that the world is not as it seems.
WritingJakob13 said...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 10:50 pm:
Mar. 6, 2012 at 10:50 pm:
A few grammer problems, but with that aside, a great story . i can't wait until you post more. Honestly, spectacular work. (:
MareBear24 said...
Jan. 20, 2012 at 9:33 pm:
Jan. 20, 2012 at 9:33 pm:
this is awesome, Morgan! (:
tEeNwRiTeR126 said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 1:10 am:
Jan. 8, 2012 at 1:10 am:
this is seriously great! nice job, post more !
AmiEE576 said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
Dec. 18, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
This is so goood! Put up more ASAP! Just, hopefully don't end it with a predictable ending like most books these days!
DrlREx said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 1:00 pm:
Dec. 18, 2011 at 1:00 pm:
Wow, u definitly should get this published or something bro. It's just awesome. =]
ELfprincess46 said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:57 pm:
Wow, one of the beat I've seen in here! Post more quickly please!
Mikey4824 said...
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:54 pm:
Dec. 18, 2011 at 12:54 pm:
This is really great! Keep writing forsure.
JeeraThis is one of the most interesting and captivating stories I've read on here! It is realy good. Keep writing 'till you finish it!
chace_s said...
May 3, 2011 at 10:15 pm:
May 3, 2011 at 10:15 pm:
this is great, definitly continue with your writing cause you have real potential =]
triathlete99i adore this! Please write the rest soon!!
thank you ! (: i've written a bit more && plan on posting more soon! check out my other stuff too (:
jen832 said...
Jan. 24, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
Jan. 24, 2011 at 6:55 pm:
i really loved this and im excited to see how the different relationships work out! can't wait til u post more!!! great work!
thanks! i have some ideas that im hoping will throw everyone about all the different relationships :)
sallyshoelaces101 said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 8:38 pm:
Jan. 12, 2011 at 8:38 pm:
absolutely love!!!! keep writing, im hanging on every word!
im glad you liked it! im writing more as we speak :)
mandy328 said...
Jan. 12, 2011 at 8:09 pm:
Jan. 12, 2011 at 8:09 pm:
it the bessttt!!!!! u had BETTER finish witing it and then publish it!!! i am very serious!!
thanks!!! :) i already have a couple more chapter and i plan on writing more soon :)))
dana23 said...
Jan. 11, 2011 at 10:24 pm:
Jan. 11, 2011 at 10:24 pm:
omg i love this book so much it is amazing!! i cant wait for you to write the rest of it!!!
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