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Shiver

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eeoopig
Shiver
Summary: Rosetta is special. She has been gifted like no other. But being able to see the future it not a gift to her - all she sees are the deaths of others. And not only that - she can sense what they feel - she cries their tears, screams in their agony, and shakes in their fear...And for this gift, an organization needs to catch her. Force her to help them...or possibly kill her...Will Rosetta be able to save her family, friends and most of all herself? There is always a price on everything...





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BekahBekah said...
May 23, 2012 at 8:57 am:
I like your plot. :) It just seems a little fast-paced, and I think it could be a teeny bit more descriptive. :DD And watch your punctuation in some places... but I think this is a great story. :DD Don't put it in that big file of your unfinished stories! XD Keep going! :) 
 
eeoopig replied...
May 23, 2012 at 5:57 pm :
ha ha thanks so much, I'll keep an eye out for that puntuation and try to describe things better :) thanks!
 
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