If Love Were a Fairytale

March 31, 2012
By Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God


Summary:

He dances with her everyday in the forest where he lives. They all dance there, but every night, when the sun sets, she must go. Every night she leaves heading north and he can not follow.


Nic R.

If Love Were a Fairytale


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Layne Hosick said...
on Apr. 25 2012 at 3:05 am
aww...so good! Sheesh such a romantic :P

on Apr. 24 2012 at 10:38 am
Kyle_Roundtree SILVER, Burlington, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
Never give in, never give up, and keep moving forward.

Great book im loving it

 


on Apr. 19 2012 at 10:00 am
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Thanks! I appreciate the comment

DanielM. said...
on Apr. 19 2012 at 12:55 am
Im just still reading, but i can tell you that you have a gift, its filled with a lot of vivid descriptions and imagery, Great job. I countine reading it.

Stacy said...
on Apr. 8 2012 at 2:00 pm
I Loved it!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 11:49 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

*the positive comment

on Apr. 4 2012 at 11:43 pm
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Thanks. Tell me what you think of it when you finish!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 11:36 pm
Writer_Jordan GOLD, Ellicott City, Maryland
15 articles 0 photos 183 comments

Favorite Quote:
All that is gold does not glitter,
Not all those who wander are lost;
The old that is strong does not wither,
Deep roots are not reached by the frost.
From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.

Just started reading but I can tell already that it is very vivid and packed with descriptive detail, especially of actions..will continue reading!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 1:02 am
Atl.Braves03 BRONZE, Tampa, FL, Florida
4 articles 0 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
God is God and I am not
I can only see a part
Of this picture he's painting
God is God and I am man
I will never understand
Because only God is God

Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate it positive comment!

EbbaRose said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 11:10 pm
EbbaRose, Adelaide, Other
0 articles 0 photos 12 comments

This is great. i loved it. The story was really sweet and sad and the writing was beautiful.

Keep writing. :))


Nics friend said...
on Apr. 3 2012 at 6:18 pm
Excellent!!!!!


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