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Doshi Series Book: 1 World Of Lies

Matthew B.
Doshi Series Book: 1 World Of Lies
Summary: Terror strikes the town of Fallio, when outer worldly person by the name of Renard appears out of the depths of darkness to put the Earth's strongest inhabitants in peril by using his mind control abilities to take over the mind of Doshi's friend, Matt with him being in complete control of both his conscious and physical body, and Renard's intentions to destroy the planet.



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MattyMattWeirdThing said...
May 21, 2012 at 12:39 pm
Eh who cares what you think? I'm a VERY IMPORTANT PRODIGY NOW! :D
 
LiteraryMastermind said...
Mar. 8, 2012 at 4:24 pm
Generally, in stories like these, one can tell if its any good by how well they break it up into paragraphs, keep momentum, and refrain from using all caps (known as the cheesy effect). You failed the test, sorry.
 

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