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Worlds for Throng

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3

I woke and he was gone. I didn’t want to wait there alone and risk him getting killed and me having no way of finding out, but I forced myself. I started studying that map he gave me, and practiced loading the pistol. I changed, and then went back to studying.
A few hours passed and he came in: “Everything looks clear. I’m going to go get that horse and we’ll meet up, alright?”
“You sure I can breathe in there for a few days? When it gets narrower?”
“You’ll have to. Here,” he handed me bags of food and water bottles, “this should be good. Oh, I guess you could have this,” he found while going through the pockets he’d stuffed the food in, “my inhaler. I haven’t used it in years really; it’s just habit to carry it along; hopefully that’ll help.”
I took it graciously, “well, thank you very much. You’re very thoughtful.”
“I want to get you out.”
“Thank you.”
“Now you listen.” he said seriously. “If they come down there after you, don’t be afraid. These people we’re dealing with, they live off of fear. They know our care for life and love of everyone around us is our weakness, but that’s also what they’re scared of. It’s why they want us dead. I know this is all harsh as Hell but you have to understand how serious it is. If they find you down there, destroy all of them.”
“Thank you, Ken.” I was shaken greatly, but settling in, I felt, was total determination.
“You’re very welcome. I couldn’t have done this without you.” I know he was just saying that.
“So we’re heading out now?”
“Yep. Take only what you need.”
I ripped out the pages of notes I had from the notebook, and a few blank ones and stuffed them in my back pocket. I put the gun in my pocket, and my make-shift walkie talkie, and my wallet, and the inhaler. That was it.
He slid the bed to the side that revealed a hole that led to a deeper tunnel. He gestured to it, “In you go. See you on the other side.” I stared at him a moment, then to the hole, and climbed in. It was a few feet’s drop. I couldn’t quite stand upright but almost. I got the gun out, immediately frightened, and headed forward; south.
I had been going for 20 minutes, when Ken radioed me: “you have a family, Tim?”
“No. I’ve always wanted one though. You?”
“Same.”
“Well then, as soon as we get out of here, right?”
“Right.”
An hour went by and he told me: “they’ve sent the kid out looking for us.”
“Seth?”
“That’s right. He does know the layout pretty well; better than Foxx, but I’m sure he hasn’t figured out the tunnels yet, so you should be fine.”
“What about you? Is Seth with anyone?”
“I’d assume.”
“How many.”
“Might as well be the whole town, they got nothing else to do.”
“What would they do?”
“To me? I couldn’t say. And if they do find me, I’ll be sure to draw them away from our extraction point.”
“But you must come with me; I’ll be lost.”
“Just head south a ways and you’ll hit land.”
“Free of this experiment?”
“Very.”
“You have to come with me.”
“I will if I can, there’s nothing else we can do. And don’t go looking for me.”
“How much longer until we’ve arrived?”
“We’re close to the federal facility.”
“What’s that?”
“Where the cloning happens, and everything I warned you about before.”
“So that’s the half way mark?”
“Right.”
“Be careful.”
“Thank you, you too.”
I could sense the tension on the surface rising, as they searched for us. It quickened my pace as well, until I found myself in line with a vent that led to a grand laboratory. Holograms and sketches all over, of our universe and heroic figures. My eyes locked, wonder and magnificence came over me, and I lifted the vent and jumped in and gazed around still. I could have stayed there forever. The glimpse into this world I was allowed seemed right, intuitively. Comfortable and brilliant. Something you could get obsessed with. Bardia Foxx then came in and spoke to me: “Every religion, every God or Gods worshipped, in all the stories, from the Native Americans to the Egyptians, there’s the same basic plot, and the same basic idea of Sun Worship. Where did this story come from? How did they all know about it? And how, in their primitive minds, was it distorted? It’s magnificent that we are all united in this way, and sometimes horrifying to me to know that there is something so much grander out there that knows us. That brought us here. We were not born from nothing, we were created by something.”
“You’re insane. It’s the simple will to live that has brought us this far, that allows us to change, that instinct.”
“It’s more complicated than that.”
“It’s what we know to be true.”
“Something that looks good and sounds good, not true. There is more chemical evidence to back this up. And we’re coming so close to being able to do it. Imagine; we could obliterate all imperfections from someone’s DNA. People can be perfect. I am not customizing them as I wish, I am enhancing them. Look at our own DNA. We’ve been spliced. This has been going on since time immemorial. We’re just now rediscovering it. This is not a bad thing. We’re just beginning to pick up where we left off. I’ll let you go this time. But if you publish what you’ve seen here today, even so much as an utterance, it’s your life. And we can easily destroy anything you may have said with the median that filters the truth.”
“When do you plan on executing this?”
“When I can.”
“And…”
“I’m almost there.”
“Goodbye.” I said with an unexpectedly warm earnestness. I suddenly understood why he wanted all this: an escape. And no good man doesn’t have a modicum in his mind that feels the way he does.
“Take care, Tim.” he said with a sadder, but similar inflection.
I climbed back down and continued. A few hours passed and Ken radioed me again: “okay we’re almost out. Row like hell.”
“That’ll do a lot of good.”
“Seth has ordered another group to get to the boat, and stop us from escaping. Guess they figured out that’s where we’re headed. So a slight change of plans.”
“What’s that?”
“When you reach the next side path, take it and describe to me your surroundings and I’ll meet you there. Then you take the horse and get to the boat.”
“You’ll make yourself a diversion.”
“You need to start that family.”
“You too.”
“I’m too far into all this. It’d be selfish.”
“You deserve it.”
“But it wouldn’t be right.”
“How do you stand all this deprivation?”
“Because I know it’ll be worth it.”
“I’m sorry.”
“None of this was your fault. Let’s just make sure you’ll be free.”
“I’m heading up.”
“What do you see?”
“A few old trees, crops in the distance.”
“Flat lands?”
“Right.”
“I’m on my way, five minutes.”
“Thank you.”
Seth walked across the field alone, saw me, froze, and walked up to me: “what are you doing?”
“Waiting for Ken.”
“Why?”
“He’s giving me the horse so I can get to the boat before your guys’ do.”
“Really?”
“I trust you.”
“Why?”
“Your father is a good man, and so are you. He’s just a little mixed up right now.”
“I know.”
“And Seth,”
“Yes?”
“You do not lead an expendable life.”
He paused, “thank you.”
“You’re welcome. You should leave before Ken gets here.”
He nodded and headed east.
There was a breeze for a few minutes. Then dark clouds rose and Ken rode up and dismounted.
“Get on.” He said, to which I followed. “Don’t thank me again, I can’t do that.”
So I offered him my hand and we shook, then I kicked the horse definitely and we shot down to the beach. I looked back and Ken was headed into the field.
I got to the boat, scrambled to set it up, and slapped the horse which sent it back to the fields, and rowed like hell. Rain started and fog rose above the waters. Perfect for my escape, bad for my journey. I sped up, pushing against the winds, took everything from my wallet to my pocket, and used it to scoop the water out and dump it into the sea. The rain thickened and the wallet soon became useless. I could see land ahead, barely, so I kept on as fast as possible, then a wave finished off the sinking boat, so I emptied my pockets and took off my sweater, and swam. The water was freezing, I thought I was going to die, but I couldn’t, I had to fulfill the object Kenneth Scott assigned me. I passed out from the cold and the waves brought me to shore.
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KatieP33This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 2 at 10:28 pm:
Definitely one of the best on here! the way the plot slowly envelopes is awesome and its such a grand, intense and intricate theme and plot. And thanks for adding me as a character ;)
 
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colormenerdy said...
Jun. 5, 2012 at 1:43 am:
Very wonderful! I can't wait to finish reading it . 
 
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LoveFucckingEternallyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 2, 2012 at 3:51 am:
from the bit i've read so far this is awesome!! keep up the amazing writing!!!
 
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chloe_garrettThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 2, 2012 at 9:52 pm:
I LOVE THIS! You are a really amazing writer. Do you plan on being a writer when you get out of school (if you aren't already)?
 
EmmettLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 10:00 pm :
Thank you very much! Well, I've written a lot before this, but this is the first book I've sent off to publishing companies, and I think I'm about to get published. So if its successful, then by all means, I will make it a career!
 
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josika said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 2:48 am:
hey! it was really good. looking forward to more!
 
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holyblondecheerleaderbatmanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 6:42 pm:
so far i've read almost all of it i think its really good ... Emmett keep writing
 
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swifthearth said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 8:36 pm:
This was one of the best books ever written on this site. Keep up the good work and the devotion. lol, I could never sit down and write a whole book. adds to my liking of the book.
 
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Aidan5301 said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 8:05 pm:
A completely amazing read. Very innovative and reminiscent of some of the greatest Sci-Fi and dystopian novels of the time. Definitely a worthwhile read.
 
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TheJMan12321 said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 10:26 pm:
Fantastic read, finished it in one day, hope there will be more!
 
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EmmettLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 9:51 pm:
Ah, you flatter me my friend. Thanks so much.
 
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EmmettLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 9:50 pm:
Thank you for rating and commenting; glad you liked it!
 
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RandyA. said...
Jan. 2, 2012 at 8:26 pm:
great... wanting to be readin more... life changing
 
EmmettLaFaveThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 9:46 pm :
Oh my gosh, thank you so much!
 
RandyA. replied...
Jan. 4, 2012 at 5:14 pm :
you welcome
 
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CestAujourdDamon said...
Dec. 31, 2011 at 10:48 pm:
Phenomenal book, Life changing, ill never be able to look at the world the same way again after reading this. Incredible piece of literature, Young Mister LaFave has a bright future in this buisness!
 
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Jappyalldayeveryday said...
Dec. 29, 2011 at 2:47 pm:
This plot is very complex, and the dialogue is extremely deep. I enjoyed the first chapter :)
 
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