Love Sucks

August 26, 2011
By Anonymous

Summary:

Ayslinn and Tony have been friends for years, and then Vlad comes into town. Vlad pursues Ayslinn, much to Tony's discomfort, for Tony wants Ayslinn for himself. Who will Ayslinn end up with? Read it all to get the answer!


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Love Sucks


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on Aug. 17 2014 at 4:54 pm
real_saxman BRONZE, Broomfield, Colorado
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I should start off by saying, it was a great read. You're writing is more vibrant than many others I've seen. However, I should draw your attention to simple, grammatical issues. When your writing dialogue be sure to indent when another person's speaking, that way the reader doesn't get confused. It's a minor fix, but one worth looking into nonetheless. Thanks again for your writing.


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