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Love Sucks

By , Wilmington, NC
Love Sucks
Summary: Ayslinn and Tony have been friends for years, and then Vlad comes into town. Vlad pursues Ayslinn, much to Tony's discomfort, for Tony wants Ayslinn for himself. Who will Ayslinn end up with? Read it all to get the answer!

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real_saxman said...
Aug. 17, 2014 at 4:54 pm
I should start off by saying, it was a great read. You're writing is more vibrant than many others I've seen. However, I should draw your attention to simple, grammatical issues. When your writing dialogue be sure to indent when another person's speaking, that way the reader doesn't get confused. It's a minor fix, but one worth looking into nonetheless. Thanks again for your writing.

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