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Wandering Soul

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Theresa E.
Wandering Soul
Summary: The world as we know it came to an end in June, year 1290 when the nuclear war broke out. People claimed that the Cold War had come to an end in the late 1900s when Mikhail Gorbachev came into power and the U.S.S.R. fell drastically from its high position. It turns out people were wrong.
For years instead, it had been brewing malignantly beneath the roofs of the two sides’ heads. It was on the whim of two said to be extraordinary men under normal circumstances that it happened. Yet it was not under normal circumstances when the first bomb was released so suddenly, upsetting before killing the most optimistic of a people there ever was in a hundred years. But after so many great years, it was only fair that the world took such a rough turn.
Nobody, however, accounted for the world’s end on their agendas. Nobody was prepared. I, barely settling in my first year at college, certainly was not prepared.





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whiteroseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27 at 12:38 am:
This seems so intense, I love it.  I like how there's the perfect gentlemen and the sweet guy, but most of all I LOVE the end.  This is most definitely 5/5.  Keep writing, also can you check out some of my work.
 
Garnet77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 27 at 2:29 am :
Thank you! And I'll try to get around to your work soon :)
 
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whiteroseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 27 at 12:38 am:
This seems so intense, I love it.  I like how there's the perfect gentlemen and the sweet guy, but most of all I LOVE the end.  This is most definitely 5/5.  Keep writing, also can you check out some of my work.
 
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Coral Y. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 24 at 7:14 pm:
Awesome story! The idea of watching your boyfriend fall for someone else when you can do nothing about it is heartwrenching...I liked your ending because it did seem fitting for Rose to finally let go of David even if it was a bit painful to read. 
 
Garnet77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 24 at 7:45 pm :
Yeah, that's what I was going for. Thank you so much for the comment! :)
 
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CautionwetPaintThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 6 at 9:14 am:
Hey garnet, sorry it took me so long to comment. But this is epic!!! It's definitely understandable how it got rated #2 :) I only had time to read the first chapter but I definitely intend on finishing it. Awesome Job!
 
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Jan. 6 at 9:06 pm :
Thanks!!! :)
 
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ZennyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 11, 2011 at 9:17 am:
I really like your writing style. THe characters and Justin's problem and mentality with his father are believable, too. I really like it, especially how i kept reading even when there was light action in teh beginning. nice job.
 
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Dec. 12, 2011 at 4:10 am :
I'm glad it seemed believable. Thank you :)
 
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RayBaytheDinosaurThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 24, 2011 at 11:29 pm:
This is really awesome and so creative! You really have a great talent for writing =D
 
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Oct. 25, 2011 at 12:08 am :
Thank you :)        
 
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ZeRo183. said...
Oct. 22, 2011 at 5:43 pm:
wow. words can not describe, and i thought it was very true about the first love, it makes you more stronger.
 
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Oct. 23, 2011 at 7:50 am :
Thanks so much :)
 
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yellowflowerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 10, 2011 at 1:21 pm:
I love this! the idea of being there but not seen or heard is very intriguing! so creative! WOW! :)
 
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Sept. 10, 2011 at 8:58 pm :
Thank you :)
 
ArchimedesWhiteThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 7:38 am :

I can't finish it right now, but i'm going to try. It is amazing, and i'm glad i waited...

All in all- well done!

 
Garnet77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 9:43 am :
Thank you!! 
 
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Garnet77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 4, 2011 at 8:56 am:
The ending has been posted, so all of you have been waiting, please leave your thoughts! It would mean the world to me. :)
 
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TimekeeperThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 2:44 pm:
Excellent! Your characters were relatable and grounded, even the "unrealistic" parts of the storyline were handled perfectly!
 
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Aug. 7, 2011 at 8:10 pm :
Thanks so much! I was aiming for that :)
 
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AddictedToWritingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 1:04 pm:

Wow.  Great job with this, it just keeps getting better and better.

I think the ONLY error I caught this time was when Natalya was saying that the needed new supplies or something, you used 'knew' instead of 'new'.  Very different words.  :P

Amazing job, definately one of the higher caliber pieces here on TI.

 
Garnet77This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Aug. 7, 2011 at 8:09 pm :
Thanks for catching that, and it means so much that you like this so much!!! Thank you :)
 
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Love.Hate.Passion.This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 4, 2011 at 11:35 am:

This was awesome !

I feel so bad for Rose though :(

 

Keep up the good work !

 
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Aug. 4, 2011 at 6:33 pm :
Thanks so much! :)
 
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JustAnotherOwlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2011 at 11:04 am:
This novel is so interesting! The idea is so original. It's written very well and easily keeps attention. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I'm really looking forward to reading the rest. I have a question, though...Does this take place in the future? (I was wondering...because in the summary, it says the year '1290'...). Why can't novels be favorited? :)
 
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Aug. 4, 2011 at 2:20 am :
Yeah, I actually posted a comment somewhere below that it was a typo. Haha, the year is supposed to be 2090. Thanks so much for the comment. It means a lot :)
 
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AnnaBanana said...
Aug. 1, 2011 at 4:58 am:
I really enjoyed the character development between David and Natalya.  You can develope this even further.  I like the fact that they are so different from each other...I also like the fact that David experienced the deaths so quickly, ie his brother, his parents and the others...this can really be a character builder.  It is really good, please keep writing!!
 
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Aug. 4, 2011 at 2:18 am :
Thank you!!! :)
 
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DelictiousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 6:59 pm:
When is the new chapter coming up?? I'm dying to read it(:
 
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Jul. 29, 2011 at 1:33 am :
Soon! I really want to finish chapter 6 so that I can post two chapters at once, but I'm kind of having trouble finishing it. I will try to get around to posting in the next week. Sorry for the wait! 
 
DelictiousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 17, 2011 at 6:16 pm :
They are AMAZING! I love this novel. For some reason, I keep on having flashbacks to The Host (If you've ever read it) and some characters/plot. It's VERY different, I just somehow think about that(:
 
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Aug. 18, 2011 at 9:02 am :
I haven't read it actually. But I'm glad you like this so much :) I'm working on the last few chapters and I'll try to post all of them in the next week or so. :)
 
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DanealleThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 28, 2011 at 8:08 am:
I love this story! You took an old topic and put a fresh spin on it! Great job!
 
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Jul. 28, 2011 at 8:21 am :
Thank you! I'm glad you like it! :)
 
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MissDarkCrossThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 27, 2011 at 7:25 pm:
I really liked to topic in this..I really don't like this genre of books..nor movies..but I really liked this story..keep writing <3
 
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Jul. 28, 2011 at 1:55 am :
 Thanks   :)
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 7:56 pm:
omg this is sooo good! i've only read the first chappie and im hooked. the only problem is just some flow issues, but by the end its so suspenseful that it doesn't even matter :)
 
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Jul. 25, 2011 at 8:21 pm :
ok just finished it...and i love it so much! the only thing i suggest is just to add something to the plot...maybe they find another person/people, something mysterious that may have to do with the impending nuclear war, or (if you want the story to be kinda short) rose's body? or you could have rose go off somewhere (maybe the white house or russia's equivalent). idk, those are just some ideas, but you probably have it all figured out :) keep up the nice work!
 
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Jul. 28, 2011 at 1:55 am :
Thanks!!! I'm glad you liked it. And I will be adding something. I kind of have to write it first, but hopefully, I'll have something posted soon. :)
 
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leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 23, 2011 at 5:25 pm:
i don't have time to start this one yet, but its sounds awesome! i'll start it either later today or in the next couple of days
 
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Jul. 23, 2011 at 6:25 pm :
Start it anytime :) 
 
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leah1027This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
Omg, this is AMAZING. Can you pretty please post the next chapter soon? I'm leaving for camp in  few days but I'm dying to know what happens next. :) One thing though: Is her real body alive? That's just a little confusing since everyone else in the room she was in was incinerated but she miraculously wasn't. Either way though this book is great.
 
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Jul. 20, 2011 at 1:43 pm :
I'll post the next chapter, but you may not see it for a week or two--it needs to be approved by teenink first. And as for the body, I don't want to give any spoilers. All you have to know for now is that her soul is alive. :) Thanks for the comment. 
 
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Jul. 18, 2011 at 4:47 pm:
I just caught a mistake in the summary, where the year the world ended is supposed to be 2090, not 1290. Whoops. :l 
 
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tealbirdThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 5:30 pm:
I love your writing style! It puts so much personality into the character, and makes the story so intriguing! I think that the work you did is fantastic!
 
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Jul. 17, 2011 at 5:40 pm :
Well thank you! I'm so glad you think so! :)
 
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DelictiousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:13 pm:

I have to be honest, I did NOT want to read a novel when you first commented on my thing. But then I started to read, and really fell in love with the character's and what was going on. As the others said, the beginning is a bit rushed, but you got a handle on that by the last chapter that is posted. I really am eager to read more.

I loved what Rose said to them when she was in her out of body experience, how she would respond to their questions and talk to them even though they co... (more »)

 
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Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:15 pm :

PS I love the title to the book, very nice(:

And I forgot to mention that I found it a bit weird that TWO of the main character's had dead fathers... And then another one had a brother die. It's seems like a lot of death that just is coincidental in this small group of friends, especially two having the same close family member die. I don't know if it's just me, but I found that a bit, weird.

 
DelictiousThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:23 pm :
PSS
Sorry.. Bahaha, but I keep forgetting things I wanted to say! 
I just have to ask, are you a male or female? The whole story I couldn't figure it out... And I just really was curious, since the main character is a girl, I thought you were. But, of course, I've written stories with guy main characters and I'm a girl, sooo.... 

Sorry for like the paragraph asking one question(:
 
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Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:34 pm :
I'm a girl, to answer your question. :) And thank you so much for the feedback!!! I know, the whole dead father thing was kind of unrealistic--it kind of just happened. Don't know why. But I'm so glad you like this, and took the time to read and comment! Three times! Haha. Thanks. The book is undergoing some serious revision, so hopefully, the final will be better. (If I can ever get it done). 
 
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