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I woke up when someone was creeping down the hall way. I shattered an ice block in front of my door, and threw the ice pieces out my window that was open. I opened the door and looked down the hallway. I immediately saw someone tip toeing down the hallway. I froze time because I got scared. I decided since the time was frozen, to go and see who it was. I looked, and saw Corbin with a knife in his hands. I grabbed the knife and time un-froze. He instantly looked at his hand, where the knife was. "What
This is my shortest (I don't know why it is so short)
in the hell are you doing?" I whispered. He turned his head and looked at me suprised. "How . . . did you get there?" I rolled my eyes, but he couldn't see me. I walked over to the window in the hallway and dropped the knife, but I froze it before it moved any. "Go to bed. Before I tell your mom." He nodded, and walked to his room. I reached back out the window to grab the knife. It looked really old, and had Latin writing on it. Time for some research tomorrow.
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Rachellee said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 6:18 pm
That's a really good story so far :)
 
Jasper23 replied...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 6:37 pm
Thanks, I am glad you like it.
 
Rachellee replied...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:10 pm
Are you writing more?? :)
 
Jasper23 replied...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:11 pm
Yes I am I will post some more in just a minute.
 
Jasper23 replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 7:30 pm
I have posted more.
 
Rachellee said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 6:17 pm
That's a realy good story so far :)
 
jbaker0184 said...
Mar. 28, 2011 at 12:37 pm

Very interesting, what was your motivation.  Keep in touch.

 

 
Jasper23 replied...
Mar. 29, 2011 at 8:44 pm
My motivation was I really don't know just liked the Idea. What do you think of it?
 

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