I was once...

January 20, 2011
By hopeiseternal SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
hopeiseternal SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Some things are highly unrealistic; That should not stop us from doing them.


Summary:

Keller Sanders was not expecting the Spanish Inquisition when she crashed into a tree. SHe was not expecting the Salem Witch Trials when she stopped in a gas station for food. Keller was not expecting a twisted love triangle, but it happened anyway.
KEller is thrown into a tumultuous battle for Earth, and is forced to hit the ground running--or die.


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I was once...


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on Feb. 18 2011 at 12:05 pm
hopeiseternal SILVER, Farmington, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
Some things are highly unrealistic; That should not stop us from doing them.

The opening is COMPLETELY different, when I post the edited version you can tell me which parts you like better and which parts I should keep the way I wrote them in the first draft, 

Thank you so much for the nice comments :)  I will be reading your work :)


on Jan. 29 2011 at 12:02 pm
Timekeeper DIAMOND, Cary, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"A guy walks up to me and asks 'What's Punk?'. So I kick over a garbage can and say 'That's punk!'. So he kicks over a garbage can and says 'That's Punk'?, and I say 'No that's trendy'!"- Billie Joe Armstrong, Green Day

This is interesting and totally different. It's fun and dark at the same time, but mostly fun.

How different is the opening in the final version? What changed?

 

please check out my novel "SuperNOVA" and let me know what you think! Thanks :D



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