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A New Era

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Ch.8

“It might be stormy now but it can’t rain forever.”

“Are you sure it is going to work?” mom asked doubtfully.
“Yes of course” Dad said
“Remember the children’s lives are at the risk” Agatha reminded.
“Don’t worry, we have checked and re-checked it.” Mr. Parker reassured.
It seemed a good idea to me. The members of BSEN scratched their brains and thought that it had been 10 years since the people shifted to EN and definitely there must be some kind of DNA change, so to find it they took a DNA sample from a person residing in EN and one sample from E-ians. (One of the dead, found in the CPEN gunfire) and they noticed that there is a slight change due to the atmospheric difference.
The air here is more pleasant and there a many small micro-organisms which only the ENs can tolerate. The BSEN decided that if they would take some volunteers (which include Ira, Evan, Jo, Sam, Naomi and me) they will spread a virus known as ‘Hico-siko virus’ in every village. The E-ians will start having skin itches and rashes once they come in contact with the HSV. This will help in distinguishing them with the ENs as they will turn red with rashes. It will take 40 minutes for the virus to multiply into millions. This will help differentiate ENs with E-ians, therefore the new military will start shooting and killing them. According to them, this has to be done because the E-ians are not accepting their idea.
Finally, something good is happening.
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TheUnknownAnonymous said...
Nov. 16, 2012 at 5:43 am:
LOVED YOUR STORY!!!  THE ENDIND WAS JUST EPIC!! :)
 
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mikey123 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:56 am:
I LIKED THE STORY BUT I THINK THE CLIMAX MADE THE BOOK WORTH READING!!! <3
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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a new era? nice name said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:54 am:
i liked the book but it could've been better... "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." --Toni Morrison
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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imagine.a.world. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:35 am:
AWEOSOME AND I LOVED IT
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:36 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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LOVERR said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:26 am:
HEEY! this is the first thing i ever read and i LOVE IT!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:37 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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CrAzYaNn said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:36 pm:
I think you are so unique:) I really like your ideas and I would love to know how you were able to come up with this !!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 3:47 am :
i am really very happy you liked it...
:) BTW the idea just came... :)
 
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Born2Love97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:54 pm:
VERY good! I absolutely loved it! Happy writing!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:55 am :
Glad to know that you liked it!! :D Thanks for your feedback!! :D :D
 
I agree Born2love97 replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:58 am :
i have been reading many books in teenink and this is a really nice story! :)
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:06 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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Writer Y. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:56 am:
loved the quotes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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Liar L. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:46 am:
OMIGOD I LOVEEED IT KWWP WRITING! loll
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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KingMothra said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 8:53 am:
Wow...Deep. I just got goosebumps! Very, very well written. I like your combo of modern writing (OMG!!!) and Earth's demise (Darned humans, we WILL kill the Earth, mark my words). Thanks for posting on MCAA, by the way. I look forward to reading more of this! (I haven't quite finished, you see).
 
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