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A New Era

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Ch.3

“We are all in the same game- with different levels.
Dealing with same hell- just different devils”.

I could see the mayor speaking in the mike, “There is nothing to worry, stay calm. Now I would like to go the facts…” before the Mayor could go on dad switched off the T.V.
“What’s the matter dad?” I asked. He seemed worried. Everyone seemed worried except me and Ira, as we were the only one who had no idea about what the hell was going on.
“It’s nothing.” Dad said.
“They should know it! I mean they are anyway going to know it, so why don’t we tell them?!!” mom protested.
“We’ll tell them” Evan said and dragged me and Ira with him. Naomi came along.
When we reached our bedroom I quickly got down to my bed and looked at them with a lot of hopes.
Silence.
“So?” Ira asked after a long stillness.
Silence.
“So…?” I repeated nervously.
“So-Ohm- you remember today dad told us about, well about earth…how life is there.”
“Yes of course it is really bad and sad…no instance of humankind!”
“Yea…so the people of earth…fine I’ll just let it go…” Naomi took a deep breath and continued.
“Yea, so as I was saying the life in earth is completely dejected. The ozone layer is almost finished. People eat all kind of rubbish food. There is practically no life there. So the people of earth got really fed-up and they have all been trying to come in EN, for a long time, to get a better life. But of course they can’t come for free and also there are many conditions to it…you know there’s a book called “Rules of survival” it has all the conditions…”
“Just spit it out!” Ira said sharply.
“Alright, so as I was saying, they wanted to come in earth and they have been trying for so long, a few people in earth made many, many spaceships, bombs, guns etc. to make sure that all the people from earth come and…well attack here…so um… the-the-they have attacked here!” I could feel the horror in her voice.

“They have what?” I said as calm as I could. I could hear my voice trembling.
“Well, did you tell them?” Mr. Parker asked as he entered our room.
“Yes dad.” Evan answered.
“Fine then in 30 mins pack all your cloths and books, we are going to leave this place and go in a hide out, make sure you don’t add useless stuff and act normal don’t try to act oddly…we have arranged with some people…we’ll be staying at their home until the place is safe.”
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TheUnknownAnonymous said...
Nov. 16, 2012 at 5:43 am:
LOVED YOUR STORY!!!  THE ENDIND WAS JUST EPIC!! :)
 
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mikey123 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:56 am:
I LIKED THE STORY BUT I THINK THE CLIMAX MADE THE BOOK WORTH READING!!! <3
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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a new era? nice name said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:54 am:
i liked the book but it could've been better... "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." --Toni Morrison
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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imagine.a.world. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:35 am:
AWEOSOME AND I LOVED IT
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:36 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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LOVERR said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:26 am:
HEEY! this is the first thing i ever read and i LOVE IT!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:37 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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CrAzYaNn said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:36 pm:
I think you are so unique:) I really like your ideas and I would love to know how you were able to come up with this !!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 3:47 am :
i am really very happy you liked it...
:) BTW the idea just came... :)
 
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Born2Love97 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:54 pm:
VERY good! I absolutely loved it! Happy writing!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:55 am :
Glad to know that you liked it!! :D Thanks for your feedback!! :D :D
 
I agree Born2love97 replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:58 am :
i have been reading many books in teenink and this is a really nice story! :)
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:06 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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Writer Y. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:56 am:
loved the quotes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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Liar L. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:46 am:
OMIGOD I LOVEEED IT KWWP WRITING! loll
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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KingMothraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 8:53 am:
Wow...Deep. I just got goosebumps! Very, very well written. I like your combo of modern writing (OMG!!!) and Earth's demise (Darned humans, we WILL kill the Earth, mark my words). Thanks for posting on MCAA, by the way. I look forward to reading more of this! (I haven't quite finished, you see).
 
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