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A New Era

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Ch.14

“I know I’d do it all different if I had the chance
But all I got are these roses to give
And they can help me make amends.”
-Skillet

3 Years later:
3 years ago from now, the war ended but I also lost Naomi. Now when I am standing in front of her grave, cherishing all the good memories, I think how unfair it was that she died…
It is really cold now…It might snow…
Naomi I know you are watching me, I love you too Naomi…I love you too…
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TheUnknownAnonymous said...
Nov. 16, 2012 at 5:43 am:
LOVED YOUR STORY!!!  THE ENDIND WAS JUST EPIC!! :)
 
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mikey123 said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:56 am:
I LIKED THE STORY BUT I THINK THE CLIMAX MADE THE BOOK WORTH READING!!! <3
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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a new era? nice name said...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:54 am:
i liked the book but it could've been better... "If there's a book that you want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it." --Toni Morrison
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:04 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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imagine.a.world. said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:35 am:
AWEOSOME AND I LOVED IT
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:36 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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LOVERR said...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:26 am:
HEEY! this is the first thing i ever read and i LOVE IT!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 14, 2012 at 3:37 am :
Thanks a lot i really appreciate it!
 
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CrAzYaNn said...
Oct. 12, 2012 at 2:36 pm:
I think you are so unique:) I really like your ideas and I would love to know how you were able to come up with this !!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 13, 2012 at 3:47 am :
i am really very happy you liked it...
:) BTW the idea just came... :)
 
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Born2Love97This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2012 at 3:54 pm:
VERY good! I absolutely loved it! Happy writing!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 20, 2012 at 5:55 am :
Glad to know that you liked it!! :D Thanks for your feedback!! :D :D
 
I agree Born2love97 replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 3:58 am :
i have been reading many books in teenink and this is a really nice story! :)
 
Vagabond replied...
Oct. 15, 2012 at 4:06 am :
really very Glad to know you like it! thanks!
 
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Writer Y. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:56 am:
loved the quotes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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Liar L. said...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 7:46 am:
OMIGOD I LOVEEED IT KWWP WRITING! loll
 
Vagabond replied...
Sept. 15, 2012 at 8:02 am :
Thanks! really glad you liked it
 
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KingMothraThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 9, 2012 at 8:53 am:
Wow...Deep. I just got goosebumps! Very, very well written. I like your combo of modern writing (OMG!!!) and Earth's demise (Darned humans, we WILL kill the Earth, mark my words). Thanks for posting on MCAA, by the way. I look forward to reading more of this! (I haven't quite finished, you see).
 
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