365 Days

June 14, 2012
By AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Summary:

Two nameless characters' love story over the course of 12 months.


AugustusH20s

365 Days


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AugustusH20s said...
on Aug. 2 2017 at 9:20 pm
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Glad I could help. x Let me know if there's anything I can clear up for you!

on Jun. 2 2014 at 1:00 pm
WOWriting SILVER, Broadstairs, Other
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Beautiful :) just beautiful. I was a bit depressed before I read this and now I'm happy. My only critisizm is that some things were worded strangly and i didn't really get what it meant.

AugustusH20s said...
on May. 25 2014 at 6:43 pm
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Thank you very much! You're very kind. :) xBri

AugustusH20s said...
on May. 25 2014 at 6:42 pm
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Wow! This is very, very kind. I'm so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you! xBri

Maroon5Lover said...
on Oct. 11 2013 at 7:00 pm
this is a really beautiful story . you can raelly connect with the characters.PLEASE NEVER  STOP WRITING!!!!!!

on Jul. 15 2013 at 1:18 pm
TangledLaces21 BRONZE, Beaumont, California
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Favorite Quote:
"This ain't goodbye. This is just where love goes, when words aren't warm enough, to keep away the cold."

Not only did I feel connected to the characters, but this story drew me in with it's mystery and great vocabulary. It felt like reading a diary of a friend, feeling their pain as it came and went. Perhaps this is one of your own experiences, and that's why it's so meaningful. Or you could just have the gift of being an exceptional writer. Either way, this story touched me deeply for my own personal reasons. If I had the words, I'd tell you how beautifully it was written and how the 365 days was the perfect beginning and end. I'd tell you how you stirred thoughts that had nested in my head, old and new. I'd even tell you that I'm glad you didn't add more than was needed, but didn't delete what was needed most. But I don't the words to explain how this changed something in me, changed how I look at life, changed how I think about certain people. I'm not sure if you meant for a reaction like mine, or if you were hoping for something more simple or complex. But thank you for posting this.

AugustusH20s said...
on Jun. 29 2012 at 11:05 pm
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. 

 

Can I trouble you for a more specific explanation of what wasn't clear to you? Maybe I can help clear some stuff up. Thanks x Bri


on Jun. 29 2012 at 11:01 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

That is so cute! I love it, but I think it could use some improvement on character development, especially.

Also, I didn't understand some of stuff that happened in the middle so I think you should make the plot clearer.

But I loved the idea of the months and 365 days! Great job!

<3


Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 10:51 pm
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

YAY! That's awesome! Can't wait :D

AugustusH20s said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 1:39 pm
AugustusH20s, Thousand Oaks, California
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Aw, I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Yes, there will be more. xBri

Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jun. 18 2012 at 5:15 am
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
10 articles 34 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

I really like this piece :) I must admit, I am quite eager for more ^_^ I love how the characters connect and the insecurities weaved throughout it. I love it :)
Will there be a chapter 6?


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