Thank you for your book, it was so nice to read while I was stuck at school!
Anyway, the story itself, I got lost at one point but that might be because I was attempting to pay attention in class at the same time, so my bad.
I love the characters and I love the way that you change perspectives, it really adds depth to the story. I think the ending may have been a bit rushed, but it didn't have any major effect.
I loved it so keep writing because you've got great talent!more »)
You really don't need my permission to read my stuff... but go ahead.
And I'm glad you're honoured about me reading it in class. I must say it was a lot more interesting than maths.