One Lover

May 12, 2012
By arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"


Summary:

Anna Mason is the new girl. While everyone is making fun of her, Brice is taken by her charm.

While their friendship grows, they develop a deep feeling for each other. But will a heartbreaking move tear them apart or bring them closer?


Alyssa R.

One Lover


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on May. 19 2012 at 12:53 pm
arichman40 PLATINUM, Basalt, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Never judge a book by its cover"

No, not critical, thank you for your feedback! I always appreciate cretiques of my writing! Thank you!

on May. 19 2012 at 4:23 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

i like it. the characters have great personality and the plot has some brilliant potential.

however, i don't really love it. it was a tad too cheesy and romantic for me, but for some of the really romantic enthused readers out there, i'm sure it's fine.

when i read it, i thought immediately of a movie plotline. you could always try turning this into a script for a play or something.

i hope i wasn't too critical! sorry if i was!

<3





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