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Author's note: Based on a true story.
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The Start of Something New

I remember the day you caught my eye,
Glancing at me as I walked on by.
I remember the look on your face,
The solemnity, the thoughtful grace.
It stayed with me for all that day,
Until that night, in bed I lay.
I thought, who is he? What’s he like?
Does he read? Does he bike?
I tossed and turned, then dreamed of you.
I wondered if you noticed me too.
I felt so happy, so full of joy,
I knew you were my dream boy.
In my heart, I was sure I knew,
This was the start of something new.
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FallenAngel170198This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 9, 2013 at 9:29 am:
This is awesome. I think that the ending kind of like just stopped when a good bit came in but apart from that it was good :D can you please go check out some of my stuff? Thank you :D
 
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team_haymitchThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 1:42 pm:
emily was in 5th grade! she was little. she shouldn't have been dating, and she knew it.
 
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Zuccini75 said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:52 pm:
Oh - Good, rather abrupt ending but good job!  I just don't get why she doesn't tell the guy yes?!!?!? , it happpened to me once - I told they guy he was a moron, but went with him anyway! :)
 
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nemish23 said...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 5:18 pm:

awesome!!! keep going, i really like it.

and check out my work too? :)

 
Zuccini75 replied...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:53 pm :
I saw yours, the coloured eyes one - that was really well written too!
 
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Mrs.NiallHoran said...
Mar. 28, 2012 at 10:52 am:
OMG emily ur work just keeps getting better and better. I would rate it 5 stars, but i can't soo, know in ur heart that i love it. 
 
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