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What I Lost at the Lake

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What I Lost at the Lake
Summary: When Elli and Sam meet, they realize they have a connection. They have little time though. Noah's annual 4th of July bash is tomorrow. Sam is friends with Noah. Noah notorious for a temper is dating Elli. Elli, quiet, mysterious, and alluring has caught Sam by his heartstrings. In 1 day, Sam will experience living, loving, and losing.



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nemish23 said...
Mar. 31, 2012 at 10:25 pm:

short and sweet yet very sad :(

i love it! you could stretch the story out for longer though, you know, building suspense and stuff.

 
xxmanziexx replied...
Apr. 1, 2012 at 10:06 pm :
Thanks so much for reading! Also, thank you for the feedback. When i get some time to work on the story i hope i can develop the characters more. Maybe then you can come check it out again! (:
 
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Bookworm1998 said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 7:29 pm:
so sad :( this was good, though some longer chapters to support their feelings for each other would be better
 
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