What I Lost at the Lake

December 15, 2011
By xxmanziexx, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
xxmanziexx, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
People of the world don't look at themselves, and so they blame one another. - Mevlana Rumi


Summary:

When Elli and Sam meet, they realize they have a connection. They have little time though. Noah's annual 4th of July bash is tomorrow. Sam is friends with Noah. Noah notorious for a temper is dating Elli. Elli, quiet, mysterious, and alluring has caught Sam by his heartstrings. In 1 day, Sam will experience living, loving, and losing.


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What I Lost at the Lake


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xxmanziexx said...
on Apr. 1 2012 at 10:06 pm
xxmanziexx, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
People of the world don't look at themselves, and so they blame one another. - Mevlana Rumi

Thanks so much for reading! Also, thank you for the feedback. When i get some time to work on the story i hope i can develop the characters more. Maybe then you can come check it out again! (:

on Mar. 31 2012 at 10:25 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

short and sweet yet very sad :(

i love it! you could stretch the story out for longer though, you know, building suspense and stuff.


on Dec. 26 2011 at 7:29 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

so sad :( this was good, though some longer chapters to support their feelings for each other would be better


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