Damned Forever

September 24, 2011
By DanielleMitchell BRONZE, Sarnia, Other
DanielleMitchell BRONZE, Sarnia, Other
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments

Summary:

She thought her life was slightly normal. With the power of fore-sight she could predict anything. What she never saw coming was the loss of her lover. Greg.
Nor did she see that her soul would no longer be hers in a short amount of time. In the possession of a vampire lord known as Doom; she will obey him, betray him and most of all.
Destroy him.
But, when she becomes something she never wanted, she'll do anything to stop it. Only, she can't do it alone.


Danielle M.

Damned Forever


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nickquillan said...
on Apr. 3 2017 at 12:33 pm
nickquillan, Winlock, Washington
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keep going with this idea it's so good!!!

nickquillan said...
on Apr. 3 2017 at 12:32 pm
nickquillan, Winlock, Washington
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this looks good i hope there is more where this comes from

Jaguar17 said...
on Mar. 3 2013 at 1:21 am
WOW! love it, seriosly, write fast! If I don't read the next book soon I will die!

on Nov. 8 2011 at 7:47 pm
DEROSSETT BRONZE, Hampton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“One day your life will flash before your eyes, make sure it’s worth watching.”

“Dream as if you’ll live forever, live as if you’ll die today”

THis is like amazing.  I will be looking for the sequal.  write fast:)

on Oct. 9 2011 at 8:40 am
DanielleMitchell BRONZE, Sarnia, Other
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments
Yes sorry about the mistakes, when the spell check was going through it was changing everything throughout the chapters, so I'm going to have to go through it again and fix everything. I'm sorry for the inconvinence. :)

on Oct. 4 2011 at 12:56 pm
TheGirlWhoDancesWithSnowflakes SILVER, Sunnyvale, Texas
8 articles 0 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Duct tape is like the force. It has a light side, a dark side, and it holds the world together."

Friendship is born at that moment when one person says to another,
"What! You too? I thought I was the only one."
- C. S. Lewis

Oh my GOD. You had me hooked at the first chapter! I find your idea refreshing from all the boring vampire stories piled up on my shelf. :) Five stars!

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 11:37 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

Wait-- what happened between chapter 14 and 15? First she's cradling the little angel-baby in her arms, and then she's jumping off a cliff...

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 11:29 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

The plot has a lot of twists and turns... first Halo is crying, helpless, with the vampires... suddenly she's cheeky, courageous, and she's a werewolf campaigning against her fianceĢ...

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 11:08 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

Hm... you have a couple run-on sentences...

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 11:00 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

Question: doesn't black absorb sunlight and white reflect it?

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 10:59 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

("reflex" for "reflects")

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2011 at 10:58 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

I've only read up to chapter 6, but I'm loving it! The only criticism is that you seem to be missing a lot of punctuation, and all the "ook" verbs "look, book..." are messed up "loOK, boOK...", and you have a few spelling mistakes ("shutter" for "shudder"...).

But the story is amazing. Keep writing!


on Oct. 3 2011 at 6:36 pm
Kvothe28 SILVER, Temecula, California
5 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Excuse me while I prepare my impromptu remarks. -Winston Churchill

Tell it like it is, not how it was. -Jonathan

Break it down like a fine English double-gun. -R. Bitoni

My previous comment should read, I didn't read the whole thing, but what I did read was good. I mistyped the first one. Anyway, 5 stars. =)

on Oct. 3 2011 at 6:35 pm
Kvothe28 SILVER, Temecula, California
5 articles 0 photos 78 comments

Favorite Quote:
Excuse me while I prepare my impromptu remarks. -Winston Churchill

Tell it like it is, not how it was. -Jonathan

Break it down like a fine English double-gun. -R. Bitoni

I didn't read the entire thing, but what I thought was good. "My soul was back in my posession, but not in my body." I really liked that. =)

on Oct. 2 2011 at 9:47 pm
DanielleMitchell BRONZE, Sarnia, Other
2 articles 1 photo 6 comments
haha, that's sweet. and im working on it as we speak :)

on Sep. 30 2011 at 8:42 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

I need more! (:




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