The Robinson Boys

August 31, 2011
By Nievia, Charleston, South Carolina
Nievia, Charleston, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life gives you lemons, shut-up and eat your lemons!"


Summary:

“Are you Sabrina Davis?” A man asked, and my smile vanished.
“The one and only,” I replied, wondering what this random dude wanted from me.
“Sabrina, I’m sorry, but your parent’s got in a wreck.”


Nievia

The Robinson Boys


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Angel04 SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 at 9:47 pm
Angel04 SILVER, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
" Courage is not the absence of fear but rather the judgement that something is more important than fear" ~ Meg Cabot
" I'd rather be pulling a Chevy, than driving a Ford" ~ Grandpa Orta

I LOVED this novel!!! Is this part the end? I sure hope it ain't.

on Dec. 19 2017 at 3:40 pm
Volleyball_Life BRONZE, Wautoma, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Stay Gold, Ponyboy, Stay Gold- The Outsiders, Johnny Cade

Do you have any other books because if so I would love to read them. Post more chapters soon.

on Dec. 19 2017 at 12:37 pm
Volleyball_Life BRONZE, Wautoma, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay Gold, Ponyboy, Stay Gold- The Outsiders, Johnny Cade

I wish I could have started reading this book soon but I just found out about this site last year from my English teacher and I really love it.

on Dec. 19 2017 at 12:35 pm
Volleyball_Life BRONZE, Wautoma, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stay Gold, Ponyboy, Stay Gold- The Outsiders, Johnny Cade

I really like this book I just started it earlier this morning and finished it during my study hall class. It's a really good book and I hope you keep up with it soon.

on Apr. 8 2017 at 5:52 am
BrokenJay BRONZE, Middletown, Ohio
1 article 1 photo 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To die would be an awfully big adventure."

Went kind of fast but is still cute

on Mar. 18 2017 at 4:08 am
Blurryface_ BRONZE, Auburn, California
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I didn't get my acceptance letter from Hogwarts so I'm leaving the Shire to become a Jedi."

Write more i wanna know what happens with Xavier and Sabrinaaaaaa

Book nerd said...
on May. 30 2016 at 3:27 pm
WRITE MORE OR I MIGHT JUST DIE. YOU HAVE AN AMAZING GIFT AND I NEED YOU TO WORK YOUR MAGIC AND FINISH THIS BOOK PRETTY PLEASE!!!!!

on May. 28 2016 at 10:17 pm
Bladewolf17 SILVER, Kc, Kansas
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i feel the same way.

on Jul. 11 2014 at 10:10 pm
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I hope you keep writing! You're a wonderful writer, and your book is wonderful!

on Apr. 15 2013 at 3:55 pm
yourlove-mywings SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pay attention to yourselves! If your brother sins, rebuke him, and if he repents, forgive him, and if he sins against you seven times in the day, and turns to you seven times, saying, ‘I repent,’ you must forgive him.” Luke 17:3-4

You need to write more please. I am dying to know what happens to Xavier and Sabrina. Does Kate get stabbed too? I need more! Or else I might die!!!!!!

on Apr. 11 2013 at 2:09 pm
yourlove-mywings SILVER, Yuma, Arizona
7 articles 0 photos 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Pay attention to yourselves! If your brother sins, rebuke him, and if he repents, forgive him, and if he sins against you seven times in the day, and turns to you seven times, saying, ‘I repent,’ you must forgive him.” Luke 17:3-4

You totally need to write more. This is an awesome book. I really want to know is Xavier loosens up around Sabrina's friends. I mean, he is really ruining the amazing relationship they could have. I want to know if they end up together, and what happens to Kate and Jayden??? Do they stay together, or does someone stab Kate? Does Jayden realize what the hell he lost? I mean, I absolutely love this book. I hope Sabri and Xavier end up together, and hope that Mason finds his perfect Gay friend. LOL!!! Keep writing please, it is a beautiful book!!!!!!!!

on Apr. 7 2013 at 12:08 am
FallenAngel170198 GOLD, Bundaberg, Other
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Please, write some more ASAP? Like seriosly! who's the guy she jumped on then ran after and called batman? is he hot? Does Xavier find out the she likes him? Does he like her back? Do they get together? and campbell? Is he just her bestfriend figure or does he like her? This book is so good and it draws you in, hense why you need to keep writing it! I love it so much :D You have given me inspiration for a story I'm going to write :D Thank you!

on Apr. 4 2013 at 7:09 am
FallenAngel170198 GOLD, Bundaberg, Other
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I completely agree with lostkitten37b, this is brilliant and you need to keep writing and post it soon!

Meg777 GOLD said...
on Mar. 23 2012 at 10:21 pm
Meg777 GOLD, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
11 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breathe away"

This book is amazing! Please keep writing:)

Nievia said...
on Mar. 3 2012 at 6:18 am
Nievia, Charleston, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life gives you lemons, shut-up and eat your lemons!"

Thanks for letting me know what to do to make it better! I really could use some constructive critisicm xD I'll fix it ASAP :)

on Mar. 2 2012 at 6:07 pm
SilverLuna SILVER, _________, Washington
8 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Come fairies take me out of this dull world, for I would ride with you upon the wind and dance upon the mountains like a flame.".... W.B. Yeats.
"Flying is learning how to throw yourself at the ground and miss." - Douglas Adams

This is a graet idea for a story! I ilove it! But...you have a couple problems. Your voice and your pacing.

 

Voice: You write like you speak. Its conversational (which is great when interacting with your reader), but when you're telling us a story, conversation isn't as important as background. Dialogue is important, but where your characters are and who your characters are shuold never fall to the wayside.

 

Pacing: You're excited about your story. You want to show us what's next, but hey! I want to know what is happening now. Don't let details fall to the wayside in attempts to push the plot line along. Sure, you'll finish, but you'll be left with LARGE holes. Ex: Sabrina leaves the hospital without stitches? Mr. & Mrs. Robinson are okay with the murder attempt in their home? <--- These are you holes! Don't be afraid or too hurried to fill them!!

 

Over all, this was a great story and I want to know more! Work on filling your holes and keep up the good work!


CrazyGirl101 said...
on Feb. 14 2012 at 11:45 pm
Want.... More..... Of...... THE ........ STORY....... I think it is amazing I beg of you write more :)

on Feb. 9 2012 at 11:29 pm
Danceismyart BRONZE, Clarks Summit, Pennsylvania
3 articles 11 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
The Future Belongs To Those Who Believe In The Beauty of Their Dreams <3 - Eleanor Rppsevelt

I really enjoy this book, i wish there was more though in the previous chapters. I feel like i'm missing things! but i still need more chapters! :)

on Feb. 9 2012 at 9:50 am
i-love-cupcakes, New York, New York
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luv it great story

Nievia said...
on Jan. 30 2012 at 7:54 pm
Nievia, Charleston, South Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If life gives you lemons, shut-up and eat your lemons!"

Thanks! :)




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