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Summary: Melonie was raped by her father. Before that, she had lost her best friend to her schoolwork. Now, after almost four years of avoiding men, Melonie might just have to let the past be the past. Is Jeremy the one to help her realize that not everyone will hurt her? Or will her turn out just like everyone else? Her nightmare...





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livethelifeyouwanttolive said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 11:34 am:

THIS IS AMAZING!!! Definitely keep writing. :)

I'm now an official fan of this book

 
AnonymousMouse replied...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 3:59 pm :
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it so much.
 
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teenagedream said...
Sept. 24, 2011 at 5:47 pm:

This is wonderful:) you shopuld continue writing

 

 
AnonymousMouse replied...
Sept. 27, 2011 at 5:15 pm :
Thank you so much! I will be updating soon. Possibly within the next couple weeks because I have PSAT prep and then the actual PSAT. So.. Yeah. Thank you though, it really means a lot to hear your feedback. 
 
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Steph0804 said...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 5:56 am:
i love this! But it might hook more people if you didn't drag out the dialogue. Try to make it a bit more short and sweet.
 
AnonymousMouse replied...
Aug. 31, 2011 at 2:30 pm :
Thank you :D
 
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