~Zero~

August 28, 2011
By AnonymousMouse, Fort Knox, Kentucky
AnonymousMouse, Fort Knox, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone makes fun of you, it probably means you're doing something right." - Amy Lee (Evanescence)


Summary:

Melonie was raped by her father. Before that, she had lost her best friend to her schoolwork. Now, after almost four years of avoiding men, Melonie might just have to let the past be the past. Is Jeremy the one to help her realize that not everyone will hurt her? Or will her turn out just like everyone else? Her nightmare...


AnonymousMouse

~Zero~


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on Oct. 20 2011 at 3:59 pm
Thank you so much! I really appreciate it so much.

on Oct. 20 2011 at 11:34 am
livethelifeyouwanttolive BRONZE, North Haven, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"If you don't know where you're going, any road will take you there"
- Lewis Caroll (Alice In Wonderland)

THIS IS AMAZING!!! Definitely keep writing. :)

I'm now an official fan of this book


on Sep. 27 2011 at 5:15 pm
AnonymousMouse, Fort Knox, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"If someone makes fun of you, it probably means you're doing something right." - Amy Lee (Evanescence)

Thank you so much! I will be updating soon. Possibly within the next couple weeks because I have PSAT prep and then the actual PSAT. So.. Yeah. Thank you though, it really means a lot to hear your feedback. 

teenagedream said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 5:47 pm

This is wonderful:) you shopuld continue writing

 


on Aug. 31 2011 at 2:30 pm
AnonymousMouse, Fort Knox, Kentucky
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If someone makes fun of you, it probably means you're doing something right." - Amy Lee (Evanescence)

Thank you :D

Steph0804 GOLD said...
on Aug. 31 2011 at 5:56 am
Steph0804 GOLD, Seoul, Other
12 articles 4 photos 206 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Explaining a joke is like dissecting a frog: you understand it better, but the frog dies in the process." -E.B. White

i love this! But it might hook more people if you didn't drag out the dialogue. Try to make it a bit more short and sweet.


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