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Stuck Between Two
Summary: Payton visits Pacific Valley beach again and meets this charming, handsome, smart, and funny beach boy. She's hoping that she will be able to pick up the pieces from last summers incident with the man she had fallen in love with and hopes to find him again and pick up where they had left off last summer.
RoseluvsTulips said...
Apr. 15, 2013 at 1:02 pm
Apr. 15, 2013 at 1:02 pm
This was a great story! Are there any more chapters after twenty? I hope so because I REALLY want to hear Zack's explanation and see if Brayden ever finds out about Zack and Payton's "relationship".
Glad you like it! :) there are more chapters, I even started a second part but I'm not sure it needs a second part, I just haven't really figured it out yet. I got into college and my writing time has gone down hill! I'll be trying to write more this summer though! :)
mkc2727is there anymore???? it was sooooo good keep on wirting.
There is a few more chapters but I haven't gotten any comments where people still seem interested to I haven't posted any more up. I'm glad you like it though! :)
nemish23please please please please please write more! i love love love love love it!
can't wait to read more!
<3
Aw, thank you :) I'm so glad you like it! I have more written, I'm just giving it some time before I add more because it barely just got posted up again a few days ago. I'll add more up on Monday though :)
livelaughlove1234Oh my goodness i was absolutely glued the whole time!! Fabulous job!! :D
Aw thank you so much :) I have another 10 chapters, the book is finished. I'm just debating whether to put the rest up or not; I don't know if I want to.
Please feel free to leave comments and let me know how I'm doing. I'm starting another story and will be posting the first chapter soon. I would also appreciate feed back on that as well so you guys can let me know how you like my writing! Thank you :)
CresentShadowYeah, I did read the last chapter you put up. (:
haha okay! I have 8 more chapters written that I haven't put up yet. Im slackin a little haha
KJAngelAuthorReminder to myself. ch. 3. plz reply so i can get an email bout it cuz i luv it n im hurrying cuz the hours almost over. thx!!!
LilLover5-15Omg you have to make more the public demands it!!! LOL :D you should read some of my stories.
Aww hahah thanks! :) More will be up shortly! & I will :)
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