The Napkin

June 19, 2011
By roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau


Summary:

Emily Smarr works at Sal's diner with her best friend Glin and super-bitch Courtney, where she meets and waits on a group of strange people she refers to as "the regulars." But when a hansome stranger breezes into town, his interesting pick up tecnique sparks Emily's interest. He's about to take her on the ride of her life...but can she handle it?


roxymutt

The Napkin


Similar books


JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This book has 25 comments.


on Aug. 2 2012 at 8:29 am
Freckles3 BRONZE, ------------, Ohio
3 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The universe is not only queerer than we suppose; it is queerer than we can suppose."
~J.B.S. Haldane

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

HOW COULD YOU END LIKE THAT?!

Emily had better kick his butt out of her house immediately!!!

Are you working on this? Please? My face was inches from the computer screen! I absolutely love it! Love Glin! Hate Eric! You have to add more!


Kay_Kay GOLD said...
on Jun. 17 2012 at 1:10 am
Kay_Kay GOLD, Maclagan, Other
10 articles 34 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't dream your life, live your dream."

Ahhhhhh WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!?!? :O
It was soooo good! And soooo addictive! I'm laughing, i'm on the edge of my chair with anticipation, im going insane haha

Please, do tell me there will be a sequal? Pretty please :D

on Apr. 2 2012 at 3:21 am
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

have i ever mentioned how much i hate cliffhangers???

you have GOT to write more SOON!!!

i love love love love love your  story. it's so beautiful and true on so many different levels!

you've got great characters and a great plot! please keep going!!!


Meg777 GOLD said...
on Mar. 27 2012 at 2:38 pm
Meg777 GOLD, Shrewsbury, Massachusetts
11 articles 7 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"life is not measured by the number of breaths we take but by the number of moments that take our breathe away"

I love this! It is amazing! Please keep writing:)

kanora said...
on Nov. 10 2011 at 9:50 pm
kanora, Millerville, Maryland
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
Wow!This story is really good , its one of the best stories I read so far on Teen-ink, can you please continue it? thanks!:)

Sheance said...
on Nov. 9 2011 at 6:42 pm
Sheance, Bacolod City, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment
I absolutely love this!! And I sooooooo totally agree with the others here for u to write more, coz we absolutely need moooooooore! :) Your work's definitely worth it so I shared it with my friends and they loved it too! It's like a drug... Terribly addicting! ;-)

on Oct. 28 2011 at 12:11 am
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

hey sorry i got to answering u so late..m computer crashed for a while and although i had an i pad to work with, it refused to let me post a comment. :( so im sorry i missed out on tthat opportunity but i hope it turned out amazing. if you ever do it again pleae ask!

on Oct. 19 2011 at 7:30 pm
Bookworm1998 GOLD, Brampton, Other
17 articles 2 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
Preserve your memories, keep them well; what you forget, you can never retell.

AMAZING! i can't wait for this to continue! the comment about faking like Kim Kardashian being a celebrity made me laugh sooo hard! i love all your main characters to bits! (except eric, of course) great job and keep it coming please!

on Oct. 17 2011 at 11:02 am
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

haha I like the fact that she got kissed by the guy on that motorcycle and then that night got kissed by Glin but was like "I guess its just the fact that I havent been kissed in awhile." hahaha!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 9:16 pm
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

thank you so much! im sorry to get back to you so late...but it was my first year of college so i had to get settled down!

on Oct. 15 2011 at 9:16 pm
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

aww thank you so much! :D i hope uve read some more and like the rest!

on Oct. 13 2011 at 11:26 am
julialove94 SILVER, Rancho Cucamonga, California
6 articles 1 photo 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I live to write, not write to live"

Yes! Another exciting story to read :) First chapter done, ten to go :)

teenagedream said...
on Sep. 24 2011 at 12:38 pm
please please please please please please please write more i can't take cliff hangers

on Aug. 15 2011 at 6:54 am
roxymutt BRONZE, Marietta, Georgia
4 articles 5 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not what you look at that matters, it's what you see. -David Henry Thoreau

thank you so much :D i'll try to get more up but today's my first day of college so i'm a little busy!!!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 9:01 pm
SamanthaGrace GOLD, Fall Branch, Tennessee
10 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"If A equals the success in life, then A = X + Y + Z. X is work, Y is play and Z is keeping your mouth shut." --Albert Einstien

I. Need. More!!! I absolutely loved this!!

on Aug. 14 2011 at 12:28 pm
Country_Storm_Inspired, The Colony, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 28 comments
Ma'm I'm gonna have to ask you to write more...NOW!(: that wa amazing!!! I just keep reading it over and over(:(:

Megsalot said...
on Aug. 12 2011 at 1:47 pm
I cannot believe a teenager wrote this! Well, I can, but it brightens my day that not only adults can write a good book. I love this! I have read stories about abusive relationships, but this makes it so much more meaningful because she has a back up man. I love Glin! (whered u come up with the name?) Keep writing!

on Aug. 2 2011 at 10:35 am
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
19 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

Oh! By the way! i'm planning on doing a writing collab with someone via email. And I really like your writing. Do you want to do it with me?

on Jul. 25 2011 at 4:13 pm
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
19 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

Hey! Are you going to write more..? This is like... litterly killing me!! Will she be mad at Glin? Will Glin fall for the other girl? I know he loves her though! Deep.Deep. Deep... Down She loves him too!!! Will Eric seek revenge? A girl needs to know this stuff!!(:

on Jun. 29 2011 at 10:00 pm
DirectingGabs GOLD, Texas, Texas
19 articles 1 photo 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.\"

I want to knoww what happens!(:




MacMillan Books

Aspiring Writer? Take Our Online Course!