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Think4Ever
Shattered
Summary: Amy was just a regular teenage girl, with normal friends. Or so it seemed. Once her long lost friend, Danny, comes back to Jacksonville, she starts to see the true side of him. Maybe everything isn't a normal as it seemed...





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Irish-GirlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 1, 2012 at 10:37 am:

i love it. u gotta give me more!!!!!!!!!!!! i wanna no i need to know what happends!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

 

 
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mandapanda96 said...
Jun. 18, 2012 at 11:06 am:

Hello!

So, this is my first 'comment' on this website, and i'd just like to say that this is an interesting story from what i've read so far! 

The first thing i noticed was the well-depicted descriptions, and then the though quite cliche (excuse the absent of the accent!); interesting plot.

I enjoyed the prologue, and the background information (such as Lauren being a fashion-queen), and i liked Amy's thoughts, as they gave more humorous insight to the re... (more »)

 
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nemish23 said...
May 5, 2012 at 4:05 am:

i love it!

please write more, i want to know what happens!

<3

 
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Roselove445This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 10:36 pm:
I may have an idea for your story im writing it down now if you wanti could give it to you and you could publish it
 
Think4Ever replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 3:49 pm :
I actually already have the entire story planned out, but don't know exactly how to lengthen it and write it out. Any suggestions are fine, but I have the main plot covered.
 
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Roselove445This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 10:30 pm:
So funny i just about died lease tell me there is more on the way ps the munchkin part was hysrericall this story is the perfect romantic comedy bravo bravo
 
Think4Ever replied...
Dec. 30, 2011 at 3:48 pm :
Thank you so much! I was worried it was starting out slow, so I decided to heap in some drunken comedy. Lol.
 
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clover201 said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 9:52 pm:
"She has an irrational fear of ceiling fans." Yes! haha. This brought tears to my eyes I was laughing so hard.
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:02 pm :
I actually based that off my friend. She has that fear. LOL. I'm glad you thought it was so funny.
 
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3326susie said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 3:14 pm:
I was so sad when i saw it ended, cant wait to find out what happens, I wasn't sure abt it at first but u rly drew the reader in so i couldnt help but read on..it was awesome :) 
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:03 pm :
I know... The beginning is sort of slow. I was worried about that...
 
3326susie replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 7:46 pm :
but still its rly rly good :) 
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 3:02 pm :
Thank you! =]
 
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OnlineWriter said...
Nov. 11, 2011 at 1:47 pm:
I think its a really great piece. Keeping working hard i know how hard it is to find new ideas to add lol good luck cant wait to read more (:
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:06 pm :
Yeah. I've been so caught up in Take the Night that I haven't even looked at this in forever...
 
OnlineWriter replied...
Nov. 14, 2011 at 4:05 pm :
haha yeah that happens when you write more than one story at a time, but regardless its awesome.
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 22, 2011 at 5:09 pm :
Thank you. That means a lot. =]
 
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Bookworm1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 20, 2011 at 8:14 pm:
really really good and interesting. i love how the story isn't rushed and it takes its time without being completely boring. good on you and i cant wait 4 more! :)
 
Think4Ever replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 6:05 pm :
Haha thanks. =]  I've noticed that you've been reading a lot of my work. I guess I have a fan. =]
 
Bookworm1998This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 7:45 pm :
yeah, i guess you do :)
 
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