Hopelessly Romantic Lover Boy

June 1, 2011
By TooFlatForBFlat BRONZE, Ham Lake, Minnesota
TooFlatForBFlat BRONZE, Ham Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"You're only a rebel from the waist downwards." -1984


Summary:

Just a story about a boy that falls for a girl. Told just a little bit differently.


Dillon L.

Hopelessly Romantic Lover Boy


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on Jun. 6 2011 at 8:20 pm
Whoa. You have some mad writing skills. I adore your writing technique, and it was an awesome story. Never give up, 'cause you're definitely going places!

on Jun. 2 2011 at 6:16 pm
SarcasticPersonInTraining BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
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also i LOVE ur writing style its very unique and addicting! sorry i forgot to say that! :)

on Jun. 2 2011 at 6:15 pm
SarcasticPersonInTraining BRONZE, Woodbury, Minnesota
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OMG how are you not published!! :) i loved it! i loved that there was no dialogue and that it was kind of like poetry with the "b l u r" and "my heart sank" thing. it was all about thoughts and that was interesting. it was beautiful, and funny, cute, and realistic. thats my favorite part. becuase it was realistic that she wouldnt just run to him just because he asked her out and the rest of the story was perfect! keep writin dude ur GOOD! :) please check out my story Last Note and comment and rate please :) id love to hear your feedback!


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