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painful love

painful love
Summary: the book is dramatic suspenseful and very good for high schooler ha ha

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Bookworm1998 said...
Aug. 27, 2011 at 1:03 pm
its a good storyline, but the scenes fly by too fast with no detail. its sometimes hard to interpret wat your trying to say because of the grammarical mistakes. if u coiuld just work on that, the book would be great!
sammielovesyou said...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 11:49 am
yeah everything just happens really fast ! kinda confusing !
alpal1621 said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 4:16 pm
Ok, just to clarify, they end up together in the end, right?!
shortstack11 replied...
Jun. 23, 2011 at 11:53 am
you'll just have to see im almost done with the next chapter!!! :))))
sammielovesyou replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 11:56 am
when will the next chapter be done ?
shortstack11 replied...
Jul. 12, 2011 at 10:33 pm
next week fer sher
PerfectlyMe said...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 7:10 am
I think you have a really great plot but I don't think you put enough time on the details of the story and it's like everything happens way to fast.
shortstack11 replied...
Apr. 7, 2011 at 9:25 am
ok thanks! =]]]]]]

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