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April Fresh
Summary: “Hey so you new around here?” He asked. I raised an eyebrow, but answered, “Just moved from California.” He seemed surprised. “Really? That’s so cool.” The guy’s friends called his name. They were yelling Jake. “Nice name.” I commented. “Can I know yours?” He asked me. I thought about it for a second. Should I really tell some guy I just met my real name? I decided what that heck. “April.” I replied.
nemish23it's good. :)
the characters could be a little more defined and you should probably be aware of where your story is headed before you start, but it's going great.
keep writing! and i love julie&justin as well! keep writing that too!
THANK YOU! And your right about the whole 'knowing where the stories going.' I'm still pretty new to writing and I've got all these ideas and I just want to write them all down at once! :) And I love Julie and Justin too
ForThoseWhoHaveHeart
I think you need to write more. Soon.! :D
BobbiMonkeyAre you going to add more to April Fresh, and your welcome, happy to give you support.
Okay everyone. I have come to a decision. I am going to be pretty much changing the whole book. Im sorry but i feel like I might have made a mistake with this whole vamp. Thing. So I'm just going to go with my original ideas. And special thanks to BobbiMonkey. You've been reading this since day one. Thanks for your support
i am honestly and genuinley sorry. I am having a MAJOR writers block. Im pretty much out of ideas. Feel free to give me some ideas. Until then I think I'm going to have to put April Fresh on hold for a little while. Read some of my other stuff in the meantime.
well, in your book since the vamps hate wolves, then how about april in about to be attacked by a vamp when she transforms. Just a idea- that u could use
Hey guys! I am ever so sorry I havent posted in such a long time. I have been super busy with school and trying to pull my grades up. But with thanksgiving week this week I am going to give you all at least 3 new chapter! Thanks soo much for reading!
Hey guys. sorry I havent posted in a while. Been busy with school. Im still pretty busy but i promise 2 new chapters by Nov. 8!
Can't wait for more chapters ( Please submit more soon!) ;)
I Can't Wait For more Chapters to come :)
I been looking to see if there is more chapters and i can't wait for more (i'm kinda of a fast reader, love to read)
So glad you like it!!! Promise ill post more soon!
Hey guys. Just here to keep you posted. I have found a way to take this book into a whole new direction. Hope you guys like wolves......:)
Idk.....guess youll just have to find out.... ;)
aubreyflsom said...
Aug. 13, 2011 at 12:33 am:
Aug. 13, 2011 at 12:33 am:
write more its sooo good!
I cannot believe that people are actually reading this! :0 I thought it would just be another story on here that doesnt get a lot of reads! Thanks!
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