April Fresh

March 17, 2011
By writerchik_123 BRONZE, miramar, Florida
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen


Summary:

“Hey so you new around here?” He asked. I raised an eyebrow, but answered, “Just moved from California.” He seemed surprised. “Really? That’s so cool.” The guy’s friends called his name. They were yelling Jake. “Nice name.” I commented. “Can I know yours?” He asked me. I thought about it for a second. Should I really tell some guy I just met my real name? I decided what that heck. “April.” I replied.


Tiffany G.

April Fresh


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on Apr. 2 2012 at 7:10 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

THANK YOU! And your right about the whole 'knowing where the stories going.' I'm still pretty new to writing and I've got all these ideas and I just want to write them all down at once! :) And I love Julie and Justin too

on Apr. 1 2012 at 6:57 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

it's good. :)

the characters could be a little more defined and you should probably be aware of where your story is headed before you start, but it's going great.

keep writing! and i love julie&justin as well! keep writing that too!


AKwritten said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 5:54 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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Are you going to add more to April Fresh, and your welcome, happy to give you support.

on Feb. 4 2012 at 1:46 pm
JustAnotherDay. BRONZE, Andover, Ohio
2 articles 1 photo 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Stephen Fry - There are many people out there that will tell you that "you can't". What you've got to do is turn around and say, "watch me."

I think you need to write more. Soon.! :D

on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:11 am
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Okay everyone. I have come to a decision. I am going to be pretty much changing the whole book. Im sorry but i feel like I might have made a mistake with this whole vamp. Thing. So I'm just going to go with my original ideas. And special thanks to BobbiMonkey. You've been reading this since day one. Thanks for your support

AKwritten said...
on Dec. 17 2011 at 7:01 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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well, in your book since the vamps hate wolves, then how about april in about to be attacked by a vamp when she transforms. Just a idea- that u could use

on Dec. 17 2011 at 4:06 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

i am honestly and genuinley sorry. I am having a MAJOR writers block. Im pretty much out of ideas. Feel free to give me some ideas. Until then I think I'm going to have to put April Fresh on hold for a little while. Read some of my other stuff in the meantime.

on Nov. 20 2011 at 12:04 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Hey guys! I am ever so sorry I havent posted in such a long time. I have been super busy with school and trying to pull my grades up. But with thanksgiving week this week I am going to give you all at least 3 new chapter! Thanks soo much for reading!

AKwritten said...
on Nov. 17 2011 at 2:50 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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Can't wait for more chapters ( Please submit more soon!) ;)

on Oct. 28 2011 at 9:18 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Oh and ill read some of your stuff too!

on Oct. 28 2011 at 9:18 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

So glad you like it!!! Promise ill post more soon!

on Oct. 28 2011 at 9:17 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Hey guys. sorry I havent posted in a while. Been busy with school. Im still pretty busy but i promise 2 new chapters by Nov. 8!

AKwritten said...
on Oct. 20 2011 at 5:43 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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I been looking to see if there is more chapters and i can't wait for more (i'm kinda of a fast reader, love to read)

AKwritten said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 10:07 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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I Can't Wait For more Chapters to come :)

AKwritten said...
on Aug. 27 2011 at 8:47 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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I Cant WAIT for more!!! :)

on Aug. 21 2011 at 1:35 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Idk.....guess youll just have to find out.... ;)

AKwritten said...
on Aug. 19 2011 at 5:45 pm
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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Wolves or WereWolves?????

AKwritten said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 1:26 am
AKwritten, Anchorage, Alaska
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You should take a look at the book i have written called Bulieve , that would be really cool ;)

on Aug. 13 2011 at 5:05 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

Hey guys. Just here to keep you posted. I have found a way to take this book into a whole new direction. Hope you guys like wolves......:)

on Aug. 13 2011 at 5:03 pm
writerchik_123 BRONZE, Miramar, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you can live forever what do you live for?


-Edward Cullen

I cannot believe that people are actually reading this! :0 I thought it would just be another story on here that doesnt get a lot of reads! Thanks!


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