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The Ultimate Price

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William B.
The Ultimate Price
Summary: Fat, freak, weird, and heartbroken. Those words describe Walter Williams in the beginning of junior high. But by the end of it all, the words change.
Sweet, caring, thoughtful, unjustified, and murdered.

The only girl he truly loved had chosen another, better looking person. How can he ever compete with him, and is it all worth it in the end?

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Zuccini75 said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:05 pm:
That nearly made me cry... it was really good! Keep writing :)
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nemish23 said...
Apr. 3, 2012 at 2:17 am:


love it! you could even take the concept and create a longer story.

great job!

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Bookworm1998 said...
Oct. 10, 2011 at 12:13 pm:
this was a really good story that many people can realte to (the struggles of realtionships, not the killing), which i think is key in a good book.  good on you! :)
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Country_Storm_Inspired said...
Sept. 18, 2011 at 11:28 pm:
wow. im overweight and i can relate to walter. this story truely made me cry and i will tell everyone i know to read it!
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Jace SmileyFace :) said...
Jun. 21, 2011 at 3:30 pm:
It was amazing, I admit I almost cried. I loved it and I think you are a fantastic writer. Keep it up:)
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Sydney55 said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 4:59 pm:
This is AMAZING! I love this soo much!!!! You need to publish this baby!
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Taylor_Renee said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 9:38 pm:
jackchaseThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 7:04 pm :
oh my gosh thank u SO MUCH this is the very first love story i ever wrote and the first peice i ever published i was so worried, i know not EVERYONE will like it, but just that ONE person said it was good, u have no idea how much it means to me:) thank u SO SO much
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