Invisible Killer

March 9, 2011
By brookyboo, Houston, Texas
brookyboo, Houston, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you paint a picture doesn't mean it fits the frame


Summary:

I knew we'd get caught. I just never expected to have to live with my target. I never expected to see him again. Now what am I supposed to do? I have no clue.


Brooklyn B.

Invisible Killer


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on Jul. 16 2014 at 11:54 am
EmilytheBelleofA. DIAMOND, Athens, Georgia
81 articles 5 photos 1492 comments

Favorite Quote:
To love is to be vulnerable; Triumph is born out of struggle; We notice shadows most when they stand alone in the midst of overwhelming light.

I definitely, agree with the others. Haha, write more please! It's the best romance story, I've ever read! Your story has a balance to it, that I love! Do write more, please! It sounds like there's more, which I hope there is!

on Apr. 9 2012 at 10:27 pm
nemish23 BRONZE, Sydney, Other
2 articles 0 photos 110 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The happiest people don't necessarily have the best of everything;
They just make the most of everything they have."

"Today is life. The only life we're sure of. Make the most of today." -CSI:NY

write more, write more... please write more!!! this is a really good story and i can't wait to read more!!!

Nessa13 GOLD said...
on Jan. 25 2012 at 8:10 am
Nessa13 GOLD, Charlestown, Indiana
18 articles 0 photos 109 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love, but never fall in love, because things that fall get broken"
-Taylor Swift

The first chapter went by really fast, but it was good. The other thing is that is weird, is whyy would Will's mom just pick a girl from a weird factory to adopt?? She doesn't even know Kali...but good just the same...

on Sep. 2 2011 at 2:48 am
meleavvelenata SILVER, Seattle, Washington
5 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"No one can make you feel inferior without your consent" ~ Eleanor Roosevelt
"Sorry, I couldn't hear you over the sound of my freedom" ~ Harmony
"Nobody can hurt me without my permission" ~ Mahatma Gandhi
"Sexy fun time shorts" ~ Emily Mae

WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

G. said...
on Aug. 21 2011 at 4:40 pm
OHMYGOSH! Write more!(:

on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:45 pm
MiNdLeSsLuVeRgIrL BRONZE, Kenly, North Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you love something let it go, if it comes back its yours if it doesn't, it never was!

plz make more!!!!!

Steph0804 said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 9:03 am
Wow, you should write more. I love everything (except the fact that the first chapter goes super fast). Still, this story is really original :)

on Jun. 19 2011 at 12:46 am
TrulyRosa BRONZE, Beaverton, Oregon
2 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Play the wrong note and we'll all b[e] flat."

Ohmygosh I love this! It's so original. :) You got me hooked!

brookyboo said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 10:12 pm
brookyboo, Houston, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you paint a picture doesn't mean it fits the frame

I had been wanting to write a story about a shape shifter for a while. It seemed like it fit to make her a killer that no one can find. Everything else just slowly popped into place.

brookyboo said...
on Mar. 29 2011 at 10:11 pm
brookyboo, Houston, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you paint a picture doesn't mean it fits the frame

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

on Mar. 29 2011 at 3:47 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

How did you get the idea? I mean, how did you get started? Did it just pop into your head from out of the blue or what? Because it rally catches the reader.

on Mar. 29 2011 at 3:46 pm
FallenAngel1 SILVER, Chula Vista, California
9 articles 0 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Good Night, good night! Parting is such sweet sorrow, that i shall say good night till it be morrow."-Romeo and Juliet act II scene II, William Shakespeare
"What's In a name? That which we call a rosse by any other name would smell as sweet."-Romeo

This is very good so far, you should write more. The plot is cool and, even though there are a few typos, it is still awesome. You should be proud of yourself. Keep up the good work.

on Mar. 11 2011 at 3:18 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
6 articles 0 photos 379 comments

Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

I really like this so far! The concept is really interesting and it's both weird and cool that she just happens to be living with the boy she was supposed to murder...

There were a few typos and I feel like sometimes, things either go by too fast, or they don't have enough description and it leaves them kind of...bland. Boring.

But most of it is very good! I look forward to reading the rest of it (:


brookyboo said...
on Mar. 10 2011 at 10:07 pm
brookyboo, Houston, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
just because you paint a picture doesn't mean it fits the frame

Hey, I'm glad you liked it. I've posted everything I've had on it so far so whenever I have more I will update ;)

on Mar. 10 2011 at 7:57 pm
Kenzie22 BRONZE, Skiatook, Oklahoma
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I have a dream
-Martin Luther King Jr.

I wanna read your book! It seems amazing! It makes me very curious about it. Where can I readit? :)


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