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Love Autmun
Summary: Dustin Bennett- She doesn't look like the same old little Ash anymore. In some way she actually looks hot in her short black dress. Could my eyes be fooling me by showing someone then looking at Ash. Nah, this is Ash i know her dimples anywhere, she could be three yards away from me and I can easily spot her adorable dimples. Ashlyn Marsh- Look at him, he is already drooling for another girl. His light brown eye glazes to the girl standing next to me. She was no other then Becky Caststone, the most beautiful girl in school. Dustin is here on a date with me and he doesn't even bother looking at his own date. I feel like choking his long white neck until he is out of breath. Why did I even agree to go to the dance with him. I slowly walk passed him not even acknowledging him. "A-hole," I murmured.





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ChicUNIQUE said...
Feb. 13, 2012 at 4:39 am
i want 2 read more!!!! i love ur style of writing!!!
 
ChicUNIQUE said...
Dec. 28, 2011 at 11:41 am
i love this story but i am not the biggest JB fan. some might call me a hater but i'm just a non-belieber ;)
 
DEROSSETT said...
Oct. 19, 2011 at 7:04 pm

OMG Your a JB fan!!!!!!!

SO AM I:):)

 
Bookworm1998 said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 3:17 pm

good story - i can't wait to see where this goes. just watch the grammar a bit more. i wonder... there are so similarities between your characters

Dustin Drew Bennet

Justin Drew Bieber

Dustin's manager Scott, and Justin's manager Scooter. really clever ;) i love Bieber too <3

 
LilLover5-15 replied...
Sept. 2, 2011 at 7:33 pm

Haha yea I totally agree.

 

 
Alantis said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 1:47 am
Really good. :) Keep writing.
 

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