Burned and Changed

February 17, 2011
By Mazii, Mudgee, Other
Mazii, Mudgee, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Nothing was ever achieved without enthusiasm.

''Close you eyes and pretend it's all a bad dream, that's how i get by.'' - jack sparrow (johnny depp)


Summary:

What would you do if everything that ment something to you was suddenly jeaposdised? Would you want to help and keep it safe?


Mazii

Burned and Changed


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on Mar. 15 2011 at 8:56 am
MysteryHeart GOLD, Thorold, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Usted es especial! AKWARD!!! (in an opera like voice), ohhh fasha', what the huh?,who in the name of what?, sanity now!

It made no sense to me. dialogue was very repetative and some of it unessessary. not to mention the story line it went to fast, and alot of the characters were kind of introduced all at once with no background on anyof them. And with the whole relationship thing..... well i was getting lost.

Mazii said...
on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:46 pm
Mazii, Mudgee, Other
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Nothing was ever achieved without enthusiasm.

''Close you eyes and pretend it's all a bad dream, that's how i get by.'' - jack sparrow (johnny depp)

Can people please comment on my story after you've read it... i'd like to know what people think and what their opinion is. Thanks heaps :)


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