New life at a New School

February 11, 2011
By MattyPinapple, torquay, Other
MattyPinapple, Torquay, Other
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Favorite Quote:
To Die Would Be An Awfully Big Adventure


Summary:

Annalise is tough chick to deal with. She is a rebel.
The minute her father told her she was going to Boarding School she was not happy at all. She protested but was forced on to the train.
On the train she meets this man, who doesn't seem to be effected by her attitude. Annalise takes a likening to him. Once the train pulls into the station she losses him and thought she'll never see him again, Oh boy was she wrong. She soon bumps into him at her new School. He is her new English teacher. She is shocked, but he just smiles and ruffles her hair and goes on to his business. Once she is settled in her new home, She is met with a few problems. Dixion the bully takes a shine to her and goes about ruining her life. Tiffany. Annalise's new best friend is worried that she will do something she'll regret by joining Dixion's gang. Once she does. More and More trouble start's. Tiffany seeks Mr. Willis for help. Tiffany, Mr. Willis get Annalise back and sparks fly when Annalise and Jeremy [Mr.Willis] Hit it off.
This story is romance between Student and Teacher. Gangs, New Schools, New Friends, New Enemies, New Everything.


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New life at a New School


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on Feb. 17 2011 at 9:12 am
Vanendra BRONZE, Blasdell, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I just sneezed and it hurt my pelvis."~Jasmine Omg
"A wise girl kisses but doesn't love"~Marylin Monroe
"I didn't tell him nowhere where you live" ~me ^-^
"I like the wolves on this textbook, they have very legs" ~Jasmine Omg

I love it! it's really good so far. Please keep on writing! :D ^-^ <3

on Feb. 16 2011 at 8:50 am
Writomania PLATINUM, New Delhi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"What really does not kill you, will only make you stronger"- Kanye West
"If there was no electricity, we would've had to watch the television by candle light"- Joe Jonas
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Hi, apart from a few grammatical errors along the way, i really like your story though you should work on description as your protagonist's fury over moving away lasts for only about two seconds. As it is narrative, you could do with some inner babbling lol.

Besta luck matey!



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