Making the Change

December 15, 2010
By krzykrys GOLD, baldwinsville, New York
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes


Summary:

Ellie is just a normal girl, except the fact that her parents are split and one of them she hasn’t seen since she was little. A typical American family I guess you could say.
Once again Ellie is at an expensive boarding school because of her far off dad. She has repeated the motions over and over again, of leaving home, and knowing she is never going back like normal students do during breaks. One rich Dad in places unknown and a Mother whose heart broke long ago are all she has at home. At school she has more, she has friends and teachers for support, and all those minor details of family get lost in the crowd.
But this year at boarding school is different, something, or someone, is added to the mix and changes everything for Ellie. What happens when the girl with major trust issues, Ellie Conroy, falls for a boy who isn’t what he seems and it causes her to question who, or what she is meant to be? Will she make the change.


Krysten R.

Making the Change


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on Jun. 20 2012 at 9:41 pm
2014Nation GOLD, Alma, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never in the world does hatred cease by hatred; hatred ceases by love. - Buddha

I liked the book but i didn't completely understand it. Every thing happened so fast and the last chapter just seemed to come out of no where. You didn't have any thing to lead up to it. This is really good though. I would love to read whole thing when you are done! 

krzykrys GOLD said...
on Dec. 27 2011 at 2:17 pm
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

thank you! I realized that too when you reposted it. I must say that grammar is my down fall. Hey!, don't go giving away the plot ;p .... besides maybe he isnt! :p i'll post more soon.

Salt243 said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 10:05 pm
Amazing book! please continue it. Some "constructive criticism" would be on page 3 change " but she just chuckled. “Who’s the hot date, Tom?” to but she just went on, "Who's the hot date," she chuckled, "Tom." This would be because it sort of sounds as if your asking tom who his hot date is. I would also say that what happens when the waiter comes is a little confusing, but i guess she zones out. Still, overall definitly the best book by far, and im guessing (i may be completely wrong) but that the dude could possibly be her half brother?

LostSOul91 said...
on Nov. 7 2011 at 1:16 pm
This Sounds like an Awesome BOok :) Keep up the Good WOrk!!I would love to read it.

on Nov. 7 2011 at 6:14 am
cecemichelle BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
please write more

on Jul. 10 2011 at 7:34 pm
PeaceAndLove2015 SILVER, Williamsburg, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Storms a comin (its somthing i picked up from my family. we r werid like that. its amazing lol)

Very nice. i like the bemused relationship between tom and ellie very interesting

on May. 29 2011 at 4:27 pm
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
yo welcome....can't wait;)

krzykrys GOLD said...
on May. 29 2011 at 10:56 am
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

Thank you! i will add more soon, after finals for school are done with.

on May. 29 2011 at 9:11 am
Angie_101 BRONZE, Minneapolis Mnn, Minnesota
2 articles 2 photos 23 comments
i didn't want to stop reading this story, bcuz it's goooood.PLEASE WRITE MORE(CUZ I WILL BE WAITNG)..lol

krzykrys GOLD said...
on May. 15 2011 at 6:07 pm
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

thank you :) i would love to check out some of yours :)

on May. 15 2011 at 5:39 pm
twizzlerluva97 GOLD, New York City, New York
13 articles 0 photos 40 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Success comes to those who persist after all have given up. Which is why it is never crowded along the extra mile."

great book so far! check out sum of mine?

 


on Apr. 26 2011 at 8:26 pm
AbbyOliver6 BRONZE, New York, New York
1 article 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Every cloud has a silver lining" and "I don't get distracted easil-SQUIRREL!"

Yes, please add more!!!!!!!!!!!1

krzykrys GOLD said...
on Mar. 31 2011 at 8:06 pm
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

thank you! your feed back means a lot. :)

Bones96 BRONZE said...
on Mar. 30 2011 at 9:25 pm
Bones96 BRONZE, Charlotte, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Life isn't about finding yourself it's about creating yourself-

I love your author's note! So true. And the story has a good plot i think it's a bit difftrent witch is nice

krzykrys GOLD said...
on Dec. 30 2010 at 1:28 pm
krzykrys GOLD, Baldwinsville, New York
15 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have many favorite quotes

thanks and i'll be adding more chapters as i write them.

SUNDRY SILVER said...
on Dec. 29 2010 at 7:13 am
SUNDRY SILVER, BANGALORE, Other
8 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"THE WORLD IS A STAGE WHERE EVERYONE PLAYS HIS PART!!!!"

MY GOD!!!! I LIKED YOUR SUMMARY AND YOUR AUTHOR'S NOTE AND I KIND OF FEEL YOUR ADVICE IS TRUE. I LIKED YOUR STORY BUT SADLY THERE WAS'NT ANY MORE CHAPTERS TO READ. ANYWAYS KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. CAN YOU CHECK OUT MY WORKS?


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